Reviews for Father's Day With Kouichi

Reviews For: Father's Day With Kouichi

diana goddess of the moon 2008-01-22 ch 1,	abuseCute... don't understand why it's only got five reviews. Deserves a lot more. (well, six now) Just... Kouichi clumsy? Don't really remember that. Maybe you could harp on a bit about his falling down the steps. Also, you could do well to have some more similarities between father and son (Kouichi, I mean). It's a little vague, and Tomoko's comments seem somewhat far-fetched. Surely there should be something more, maybe have his 'avoiding complexity' thing more obviously related to Kousei's exaggeration of 'quality time'. I don't know, both more likely to resort to denial, or to beat around the bush, avoid things... Maybe I'm reading too much into this. I'm sorry, I have a tendancy to do that. It's perfectly fine the way it is.
sasuke fanatic1 2007-03-19 ch 1,	abuseLove it. Absolutely hilarious. Ja Ne sasuke fanatic1
CrestOfHealing 2007-03-02 ch 1,	abuseHAHAHAHAHAHAH! I would go on, but I'm really too tired... lol This was HILARIOUS! I was laughing my head off! Yay Kimotos! What? You think Minamuras sounds any better? :P Yes. I know. I'm weird. Hey! I'd fit into this family perfectly! Loved it! ~Child of Healing
digi harpy 2006-06-23 ch 1,	abuseThat was very interesting...and really funny. Keep up the good work on your stories.
Miss Anonymous hp 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abuseVery cute! I loved the whole thing. Your writing really brings your readers in, and the structure was planned out perfectly. End and begin with first person, follow Kouichi's side mostly with little input from Kouji and Takuya... it was all very nicely done. My only suggestion would be to show how Kouichi is clumsy. Personally, I can't remember him being clumsy from the show and I would have like to see a little evidence supporting that. Other than that, it was perfect! Keep up the good work.
Higuchimon 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abuseThis was pretty good. It could've used a little mention of Junpei, just to make it all complete (after all, you mentioned Tomoki), but otherwise, I very much enjoyed it. I especially enjoyed both mothers helping out Kouji. That was cute. Kousei made me want to smack him a few times, but I liked him all the more because of that. Well done!

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