What a sad little one shot shot. I was very well written tho. Kudos.

aw! thats sad! did that guy really rape her?

good fic

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

Wow, that was AWESOME. The idea of Fuu being a sunflower and that her seeds are growing inside Mugen is just SUCH a beautifully poetic notion, and I love it. This story is DEFINITELY going under my favorites. ;0)

That was so kawai! I never evre thought Mugen knew love

I love your stories! Keep on writing :)

I loved your story. Short but so full of Mugen and regret and all the feelings for Fuu that a man like him would fight against. Short but so full of meaning. It stands on its own but also could be part of a larger story. Glad I can read more of your writings. Please continue in whatever fashion you want. Love to read more.

I lurrve your one.shots, i don't know if i've read all of them, but the ones I have are just awesome, soo cuute and perfectly written. You're one hell of a writer! :D

Aww. Sad, cute, and bittersweet.

Wow...that was beautiful. I loved every short, yet precious second of it. ^_^ Thanks for sharing!

That is very sad yet hopeful.

Wow! Hey, I know this is a one shot but maybe you could change it and continue it . I really like the direction you're going with this so maybe you could make it to where Mugen and Fuu meet up again. Just an idea!

Ooh that was so sweet, I completly blushed at this small story, it would be really cool if you turned this into a chapter story one day. I actually love all of your short stories, keep up with them and good job :D

i do like it
it scks that its a oneshot tho