This is good, i've ome to the conclusion you're a very good writer.

Wow, just wow.

I like your take on the Seimei-Soubi-Ritsu sensei-thing. I really like the last line. Very deep.

Wow. *blinks* lol, I was listening to a perfect sad song while reading this (wasnt planned) and it just added the sadness. I really liked the last like two sentences - it brought like a creepyness to it. Great Job.