Raiha is one dedicated ninja and even greater friend write more

Raiha is one dedicated ninja and even greater friend write more

Wow! Big news really fast and with no mercy. Fuuko hang in their

Well written there! _

o and i 4got to add that it's KurEi not KurAi. and could u change the 'f' word to sumthing milder...

oooooo...hehe raiha's so cute! update soon!

seems like you haven't been updating for some time...

continue continue continue pls!

sooooooooooooooo nicenicenicenice! watch the language though. and wat was raiha doing in the park? and i thought neon was supposedly assasinating mr.davis or whoeva he is? i thought he was gonna sleep with her and she'd freak out when whe awoke and realized she loved him but she felt a bit for mikagami and lovey triangly thingy agn.

paragraphing...needs to be GREATLY improved. it gives the readers a headache just by looking at it. erm...why is it that people enjoying calling mikagami 'tokiya'..it's weird. characterization of mikagami...needs to be improved too. he would never call anyone 'that ' (as referred to in the first chapter about ami). he would come up with something like...unicellular organism.

i like this story! what is this a fuk/tok fic or fuk/rai fic or both? please continue and finish this as soon as possible. keep up the good work!

i hope you continue it, it sounds pretty exciting!

Hey, interesting_! Will this be a Tokiya-Fuuko-Raiha love triangle?

way to go fuukoooooooooo! nice way to handle her aunt. she still got guts,well after what just happened to her parents. hhmmmm, what's raiha's part in this story. a good one i hope. fuuko needs a lot of support.

Haha! that was soo funny! I mean the Raiha lookin' through Neon's cupboard bit. Contine continue!