Reviews for Jake and Elwood Blues

Reviews For: Jake and Elwood Blues

Jo Z. Pierce 2008-01-19 ch 12,	abuseOk! Have been meaning to read this for some time - but only got to it now. Fun premise! I love the idea of the boys getting out and having a nice life. It always pained me watching BB20 - and seeing Elwood rotting away there for so long. I loved your Epilogue, too, except Elwood wouldn't be with Twiggy. Sorry. My secret is out. ;^) But I love that you included the band in there more than a lot of other stories I have seen. I love Murph's future. Good punch lines. I actually was surprised by your shocker. Nice. Good touch. I would recommend, as constructive criticism, please don't write in author's notes how your writing or chapter sucks. First of all, why plant the seed in the reader's mind? Let us make up our minds. Also, if you know it is not good, then go back and edit it. It makes the reader feel better that you cared about the story. If you don't care about it, why should a reader? If you do get the chance to edit and repost, I would suggest you take that stuff out. If you want people to know that you are writing it in a light tone, and don't want it to be a (booming voice) SERIOUS PIECE, then one author note in the beginning can take care of it all. Keep up the writing! We need more BB fanfic!
teenfox 2007-01-15 ch 12, anon.	abuseOMG... donald cut off his facial hair! O.O non the less im glad you finished you're story! Yay!! :P
teenfox 2006-12-11 ch 11,	abuseok he was mayby a teeny tiny bit out of charactor but i dont think anyone noticed. glances around to see if ppl noticed anyways dont rewrite it its fine just kkep going i have complete faith!
Sax-Hog 2006-07-10 ch 8,	abuse(clearing voice after being rendered speechless) Interesting twist. I don't think even Cheryl saw it coming.
Sax-Hog 2006-07-09 ch 7,	abuseNeat chapter...Love to here Jake try and worm his way out of things! Dum dum dum, the tension is building...
Sax-Hog 2006-07-04 ch 5,	abuseThis chapter wasn't sucky at all. Agh! You've really got me wanting to know what happens with the parole...and the riots. You're an inspiration, Dani!
Sax-Hog 2006-06-23 ch 4,	abuseNi-ice! This is cool, Jake staring at some jail warden's **. It's a match made in heaven! LOL.
Sax-Hog 2006-06-19 ch 3,	abuseThis one is exciting! Update! Really good stuff, Dani. The only point of improvement is that it needs a little editing for grammer. The story is great!
Sax-Hog 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abuseHey, cool. I love jail stories. This one is sounding real good! Very in-character. Good idea for a "what-if" story, too. Write more! I can't wait to see what happens!

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