Reviews for The CSIs Who Went Up a Hill

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krage 2008-07-10 ch 9,	abuseLoved this story, it was so funny in a kinda serious way. A very good friendship fic
Cosmic Castaway 2007-07-08 ch 9,	abuseI think this became one of my favorite stories. Few reasons. One, you mentioned my state, Michigan, hell yeah! Two Nick gets hurt, can't go wrong there. It was a great Warrick and Nick friendship story, can't get enough of them and I love when those two work together. Not only that you wrote this with great detail to the point I am convinced you fell down a mountain and broke your leg and had a bone setting song lol. Anyways, great job I loved it and thank you so much for writing it!
Deep October 2007-01-05 ch 9,	abuseSweet. Some great lines made me laugh. I enjoyed it. :)
sandersfox 2006-08-14 ch 9,	abusei thought that it was really good and cute.
iboneki 2006-08-04 ch 9,	abuseDefinitely the perfect tone right down to the end. What can I say. Your Ewok and Warrick are second to none. Sorry it took me so long to finally get around to this. I wouldn't let myself even read a snippet of it for fear of never getting anything else done. But it was certainly worth the wait. I, as always, look forward to whatever you're cooking up next.
iboneki 2006-08-04 ch 8,	abuseThe puffiness had spread to above his eye making his eyebrow and forehead protrude like he was half Neanderthal. But certainly still popular among the Cave Women. “Then put me down. Tired of starin’ at your non-existent ass.” “Hey! I paid good money for these jeans; supposed to make me look like I have an ass.” “Get your money back. And put me down.” HEE! And no longer contained the keys to the truck. Oh for the love of. Ewok, is Nick gonna sing the "Bad Day" song to you next?
iboneki 2006-08-04 ch 7,	abuse“We go to our graves with this, bro,” he said as he jostled for a comfortable position. “I’m the one with a dude’s head in my lap. Just chill. And, uh, stop wiggling.” Nick pale face blushed red and he immediately stilled. Then burst into laughter, soon joined by his partner. I love them. And definitely my favorite Kid!Nick flashback yet. Where do you come up with this stuff? You should write for the official companion.
iboneki 2006-08-04 ch 6,	abuse“What? Like a bikini wax?” Nick snorted. “You’ll have arms fit for the beach this summer.” Oh, that might come in handy for my Undercover Lifeguard fic. “Reality’s not the point, Rick. You go to them because they’ll always be the same. Dagwood will always eat sandwiches, Marmaduke will always steal his owner’s chair, Beetle Bailey will always piss off the Sarge, and the tree will always eat Charlie Brown’s kite. And thus, the universe keeps rotating.” That is such great philosophy. Nicky's a smart one. And I love Family Circus.
iboneki 2006-08-04 ch 5,	abuseNick reading the symptoms of shock was so deliciously... I don't want to say ironic, because then I'd have to clarify if I was using Alanis Morrisette's definition or not. So I'll just say it was amusing and clever, as is the whole of this story. Seriously, I'm amazed (though, not really, I guess, because it's you) that you can just toss this off. Or do you slave through the wee hours of the night and I just not notice? Either way... Something about Scouts from Texas… he’d never heard it before but wasn’t surprised, since his partner and he rarely saw eye to eye on music, the Texan’s ear enjoying twangy tunes about broken hearts, crying into beer, and odes to dogs and pickup trucks, and Warrick’s taste running more to complex jazz and old school blues. But this song was just plain bizarre. He shook his head, smiling, comforted by the still pretty strong voice, clueing him in to his friend’s current state of health when that comfort was shattered into a million pieces by the sound of Nick’s voice rising in tone and volume, breaking off into a scream that sent every hair on his body standing straight up. This was all so very cool. And it's sort of reverse continuity that you've invented with all the singing... and then all the singing in Grave Danger. But you're clever like that. Is it sad that I said "Go Ewok, Go!" upon reading the final line of this chapter? I guess it's par for the course where I'm concerned. Moving on...
iboneki 2006-08-04 ch 4,	abuse‘You lettin’ go, just like that? Why?” “Cuz I’m too tired to argue with you and I know when you get like this not even Gil Grissom himself could conjure the words to stop you. So go.” HEE! Oh, there I go again. “I said, stop talking,” the words ground out between clenched teeth. “You try standin’ on one leg, your dick in your hand and some guy’s hands on ya. It’s… it’s… disconcerting, man.” No, Nicky. But it makes for good reading. Okay. Maybe not the wisest of choices. But again, it was amusing watching you try, Nicky. Page three was what he needed. I love that boy scout. Beth, your writing makes me grin like nothing else.
iboneki 2006-08-04 ch 3,	abuse“Kinda tragic, huh?” Greg mused. “Bet the momma fly wished for better for her baby.” HEE! Man, doing this all in one go might end up setting the record for most HEE!ing in a single sitting. Not that I mind. Another timely flashback. You're so stylish. Except I didn't really need that one. I've seen it about a hundred times on my brothers' Worlds Nastiest Football Injuries tape or some crap. I never believed it didn't hurt, either. Well, that's a lie. When I was nine I sliced myself on barbed wire and saw the inside of my knee and THAT didn't hurt. Of course that's different than a bone or three sticking out. Stop rambling now? Kay. Onward!
iboneki 2006-08-04 ch 2,	abuseChoking on cigarette smoke and his mom’s Charlie, the dry heat wicking away all moisture from his eyes and mouth, and eight year old little Nicky couldn’t have been happier. Because he had heard they had snow in Michigan. Real snow, not the three flakes they got every few years that never stuck. Real honest to goodness, hafta wear boots, making snowmen and snow angels and snow forts and snowballs, SNOW. Perfect. And the whole flashback was a great device for his current predicament. “I think you Theismann’d yourself, bro.” I literally LOL'd. Leave it to Our Boyz to speak in those terms. Not gonna lie, this gratuitous whump is... making me happy :-p
iboneki 2006-08-04 ch 1,	abuse“Picture that. I’d rather die than have you suckin’ poison outa my ass.” HEE! What about me? May I do it, Ewok baby? bats eyelashes Oh, I'm finally here. Reading this. And I kind of love you.
brihana25 2006-07-29 ch 9,	abuseAbsolutely fantastic. You've got those boys' voices and mannerisms down pat, no doubt about that. I love the way you dropped in the little things that made it seem so much more "real" - Warrick telling Nick that he'd Theisman'd himself (I remember when that happened... it still gives me the willies just thinking about it...), Nick singing that little song about the Boy Scouts in Texas. Your attention to details like that, I think, sets you apart from most other CSI authors. You really ground your story firmly in our world, and it just makes it feel that much more real. The only thing that even started to throw me out of the story was that one little scene between Griss and Greg. It left me thinking, and waiting, for one or the other (or both) of them to show up and find the boys in their predicament. I love the way you ended it, though, and I'm really glad that they got each other out of there the way they did. I think it would have almost cheapened it, somehow, to have them be saved by someone else. But that one scene, particularly because (IIRC) it's the only non-Warrick and Nick scene in the entire story, just left me with the impression that those two were going to have something else to do. Now, I'm anxiously awaiting that upcoming story you mention in your profile. You and Kristen are most definitely my two favorite authors in the fandom (I've loved Kristen's writing since her ER days), and a co-authored work between the two of you is sure to be a dream come true for me. :) Just one question - you say it's "another" joint venture. What story was the first?
AngelKougaeri 2006-07-18 ch 9, anon.	abuseLmao, love the ending - awesome fic! AnGeL -x-

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