Very cool, I liked it.

Though I fear the amount of angst it would contain, this chapter alone deserves a sequel.

"If Anakin were to save his mother?"

Are you kidding me? That would have enormous repercussions. For one thing, he would temporarily stave off the fall to the Dark Side. He could probably then take her to Coruscant to live under the protection of the Jedi Order. She would be able to help him with his doubts and fears. Palpatine would have to kill both her and Padme, and when Anakin loses both of them at once, he would be become even more anguished and fall harder into the Dark Side.

Your story is amazingly good, it explores all those what ifs that those who emerge in the GFFA world come across. There is only one path but there are so many possibilities, this is what fanfiction is really about.

Well, this was probably the most poorly written thing I've seen in months. With entire passages totally stolen from Matthew Stover, a complete lack of originality, total disregard for grammar, spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and paragraph rules, you've really made something horrible out of this. God knows that in no way is this good, and in no way does it follow any logic, either common sense-wise or Star Wars-wise. Quick question: How does Palpatine make an army of clone Sith including Vader when Vader NEVER existed? Truly, it's terrible.

KICK ASS!

This is great, every part of it. You're one of the best at writing Force duels, and all your what-if ideas are plausible and fairly believable. And I love your writing style.

This was a GREAT chapter. Very intense lightsaber duels. I loved it. Do you think you could R&R my fic? It's called Yoda: Dark Lord of the Sith. I'd like your opinion on it. Update soon.

By the Force that was amazing!

This was pretty good. I hope you make more soon. Update soon.

awesome!

Your ideas are so good...and especially the last...Sith Obi-Wan was pretty unexpected. But the stories were excellent, I love them :)

cool love it all

Well, this was certainly chilling, especially your description of what happened to Aayla. I shudder at the horrors Sidious plans for her to endure.

I think a sequel to this installment should be done. One that continues on from this point.