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| Neko4 2008-07-16 ch 6,  | abuseWAT GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT |
| XxFlyleaf.FanxX 2007-12-06 ch 4, | abuseHey, i like this fanfic! I love Temari! She's my fav character! 'This sounds like a job for …THE ALL POWERFUL TEMARI, famous ninja and matchmaker extraordinaire' that was funny! KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!! Cya! Figure.Skater.Bethany |
| are-en1 2007-02-12 ch 6, | abuseYou know there is more than one way to hurt ppl.Not psyhicly (sp?) but emotionly.But that was a great story.Ok hope seing more from you soon |
| Sabaku no Hime 2006-12-28 ch 6, | abusesuch a sweet story, nicely done. it's easily read, as the conversation and character's thoughts flow nicely. the only thing that confused me a bit now and again was why you shifted perspective so much. you started once or twice a chapter, and then started doing it more. personally, for the suspense of notknowing what everyone is thinking, i like a singular pov, but you did it quite well. although, i must admit, writing solely in singular pov is pretty difficult, but your writing is very good, so you might want to challenge yourself and try it sometime to expand yourself. regardless, very well written, and i thouroughly enjoyed it. i'm going to read the second one now... |
| dragonfly454 2006-11-17 ch 6, | abuseit was ok |
| i.totally.luv.naruto 2006-11-12 ch 6, | abuseman i ahte and lik u but u leace the story end here dats not fair anywayz plz make a sequel so we can no wat will happen. ^.^ |
| i.totally.luv.naruto 2006-11-12 ch 5, | abusei luv how u put gaara and sakura together in the littl eromance scene plz go on with the story |
| i.totally.luv.naruto 2006-11-12 ch 4, | abuseI... LUV IT SO PLZ CONTINUE WITH THE STORY. |
| i.totally.luv.naruto 2006-11-12 ch 3, | abusewow i like dis story plz keep continueing with the story. plz >. |
| i.totally.luv.naruto 2006-11-12 ch 2, | abuseanother cliffie oh man anywayz i luv dis chappie and story. ^.^ |
| NeeNVirgo 2006-11-03 ch 6, | abusesuper duper entiererly AWSOME! |
| Jaded56 2006-11-03 ch 6, | abusehey!!..umm AWESOME STORY N IM READING UR BROKEN2 RITE NOW EHEH...PLZ MAKE GAARA AND SAKURA TILL THE END CUZ I JZT LOVE THEM!!... |
| Vamprisslizy 2006-09-20 ch 6, | abuseawsome story! |
| loves-winged-dark-angel 2006-08-15 ch 6, | abuseSweet, I like it. Please keep it up. |
| Lina Mistress of Elements 2006-08-15 ch 6, | abuseaww |