this is super cool i must know hat happens so please write more.

plz keep wrting

The first thing I said when I finished this chapter was:

"What, no more?"

I need more! Plz continue!

My interest is perked. This is a very good first chapter, and you have good descriptions of both scenes and characters.

I like that Harry wouldn't remove the coffee stain because Sirius was the one that did, and, also why he wouldn't cut the flowers. It shows that he has a need to still feel connected to Sirius, and since he only died a year, or so ago, it's normal for that kind of behavior. Well, what I'm really trying to say is, you make Harry human. Job well done.

Poor, Harry. Just as the war is over he still has to clean up the riff-raff...doesn't the poor boy ever get any peace? Well...honestly...should I even have asked that question? I am talking about Harry Potter here, so I guess I shouldn't have.

Now what's all this talk about a fucked up Padfoot?...interesting...*evil grin* I guess I'll just have to wait and see...XD

Much Love,

BlackHawk

I would say that there is not much to critique. I like how you portray the characters; it's all pretty believable. Even how Harry is...it's not so far-fetched that he would be so anti-social. I really hope you continue writing this story, I'm curious to see where it will go.

Wow, this story is going so far so good. I love the way you characterize Lupin, some stories don't get his character right at all. Upadate soon please!

LonelyAngel

hey it seems like a good story but this is gonna be a Sirius/Harry right? more soon and please let it be a Sirius/Harry

nice

It's a very good beginning! Don't take too long to update...

Oh, I'm intrigued now. That was a really good start and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.

You know I adore Sirry, this fic, and you! :) The mood you've set is fantastic and I think also very realistic considering everything these characters have been through. I can't wait until the next update!

interesting...keep it up

Wow. This is frighteningly depressing, yet promising. I look forward to the next chapter!

I think it's great! Your unbetaed version is wonderful. I don't think you needed to wait on the beta, and besides, you can always post the betaed version as soon as you get it.

At least you have your first chapter finished! I'm so dying to get mine finished. I've never written a chapter so long, which is sad, hehe.

And yours is considerably much longer than mine! I have my work cut out for me.

Anyway, I love it. Duh. Of course. More?

nice new fic! Will keep reading