 Shelomith 2008-06-10 . chapter 1"Yeah. I was bored." Well, it seems boredom spawns some great stuff. |
 MentalModisha 2007-01-02 . chapter 1Okay...so...he ATE them? |
 E.S.Rockbell 2006-07-14 . chapter 1Good poem. Question; was it Link going hay-wire and killing everybody? |
 richawe5 2006-07-14 . chapter 1Wow. This poem was not what I expected. When it first began, I naturally assumed this was Link in the Temple of Time. Then there was that twist in the story that completely surprised me; I was not expecting that! I don't know if it was intentional or not, but this kind of reminds of the One Ring in LotR. It was like the Triforce corrupted the man's (Ganondorf?) mind and he lusted after its power so badly that he was willing to kill for it. Anyway, very good job (I guess I should call you Vladimir on here, huh?). This is the first poem/story of yours that I've read, and I can't wait to see what other creative twists you'll have in your works. (face_thumbsup) |
 berries 2006-07-08 . chapter 1 this is very disturbing.reminds me of skeleton man... |
 Forestwater 2006-06-23 . chapter 1um . . . yes, that was gory.
I still like ganondorf. it makes me wonder what happened to him. although i have a few theories.
hm. it was slightly (and i'm being fairly understating--is that a word?) disturbing. but i liked it. few authors are actually brave enough to go into all that FUN *sarcasm* detail. and even fewer are able to do it well. ya know, with all the disgustingness and creepiness. be proud! be happy! and be . . . um, um, wait for it, i need a word . . . bloody!
Alrighty. Awaiting more poems, and hoping they're slightly more . . . pleasant. :)
Yep. i think i've run out of things to say. |
 Silence-Darkness 2006-06-19 . chapter 1Whoa. When you first read the beginning lines, you think that it's Link. But then things kind of take a twist from there...
This perhaps is one of the few Ganondorf centered fics out there. Makes it hard to believe that he was once seen as a hero, eh? Makes you wonder where Link will end up.
Sweet. Gory in sections, but we all need our daily doses of sickness. I love it. |
 GoldenTalesGeek 2006-06-19 . chapter 1That's just distubing, Vlad. Now I'm gonna have to deal with that image for awhile. See ya later! |
 Pata Hikari 2006-06-19 . chapter 10_0;
Ok... that's just really, really, freaky. >_> |