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Eclipse Bloodmoon
2007-11-21
ch 1,
abuseYes, yes, I like it a lot. You have a really good plot developed, and it was a pleasure to read. You know how to use emotion to draw your reader in- keep it up.
Fair skies,
Eclipse Bloodmoon
Kya Ehime
2007-11-21
ch 1,
abuseThis is beautiful. Absolutely breathtakingly beautiful. The way you capture every emotion is wonderful. I commend you for capturing CloudxTifa wonderfully!
Jadeyuy
2007-01-05
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully written, I really liked it. Though I wished she concieved after they were married, lol
s2 CloTi
2006-12-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseI think this is probably one of ur best CloTi's
I absolutely adore it :)-though very long, but 'tis ok!
its so heartwearming, beautiful and every other compliment i cant think of rite now! Pls keep writing in ur excellent style-esp. CloTi's!

s2 CloTi
Moonlitesadness
2006-11-21
ch 1,
abuseI loved this story so much. It was just the perfect balance of talent, romance, and I don't know what but it was amazing. I love the poem too. You are awesome. Great Job and God Bless.
Eclipsed Soul
2006-09-09
ch 1,
abuseWow, this is...amazing! It's a true rarity for sure. I'm just stunned beyond words right now, and that is certainly a first.

The details, the poem, the mood, EVERYTHING was captured perfectly. The characters were dead on to how they are suposse to be, it's just. Wow...

I'm going to go rambling on that poem once more. That would be a WODNDERFUL song! I actually thought that maybe it was a song, until I read your A/N.

Keep up the wonderful work! I was feeling really down today because my Grandmother is in the hospital now, but this cheered me up alot.

Thank you! Take care!

~Eclipsed
Ichiyume
2006-08-11
ch 1,
abusei only have one thing to say:

AW, tis so sweet!

ichi
elebelly
2006-07-31
ch 1,
abusewow. wow. wow...that was so amazing! WOW. no other words can be said.
Nanashi Tsumura
2006-07-26
ch 1,
abusethat was beautiful, it was really cute alot of emotion, (love of course) and had a strong message, I really admire your writing to be honest i loke it alot!!
Bianka-chan
2006-07-15
ch 1,
abuseWOW! OMGOSH! I never thought I'd have the time to read this incredibly long one-shot, but I decided to give it a go today! And I don't regret it at all because it led me here=)

I feel so happy now! In the beginning, I really thought Cloud was gonna kick the bucket... Good thing he didn't! Looks like his angels in the LifeStream saved his butt again.

You really are good at fluff. But it's a different kinda fluff. I'm used to a different kind from you. But BELIVE ME this is still awesome!

Your poem is incredible, too. I'm gonna write poems just as good as yours one day!

This was just perfect. I know you're really amazing, but this new style blew me away! Wow.

Reiyh...I think I've seen you name their child that once before. The Bundle story, right? Aha!

Anyway, awesome one-shot! It was super-long, but it was also very complete. It had everything I wanted to see, plus some unexpected surprises.

~Bianka-chan.
goatgod
2006-07-13
ch 1,
abuse(gasp)! That was soo awsome! This was an excilent fic,really,keep up the good work!! I look foward to reading your next story!

Ja ne!
Infinite Devil Machine
2006-07-06
ch 1,
abuse*Too amazed for decent review* Wow... That was beautiful. So faving
Blackrose2005
2006-07-05
ch 1,
abuseI Loved it! *sniff* you made me cry... *sniff* and i don't cry unless that means.. *sniff* I LOVED IT!! pls make more like this. And i really don't care if it was the long. But at the start of the story.. *sniff* I though you were going to let... *sniff* CLOUD DIE! How could you..*sniff* How COULD you... MAKE IT THAT GOOD EVEN WHEN HE'S ABOUT TO DIE?!?!?!?!?! Pls let me take lessons from you! e-mail me or send me a message if you want to teach me your skills. Anyway, I Am SO going to add this in my favorites!

BlackRose2005

p.s PLS MAKE MORE!... pls.. *sniff*
Kah'T.ASTROPHUCK
2006-06-29
ch 1,
abuseThat was beautiful. That was breathtaking. That was remarkably well written. That was the absolute epitome of perfection for me. Well done. Absolutely amzaing work.
Rend
2006-06-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseok, not gonna sign it, bu yeah that was...i'm at a loss for words...oh a couple things...seph ISN'T evil, he just a victim of Hojo just like Cloud, he's mostly misunderstood, and is that girl really Denzel's sister cause well she was one week old here amd Denzel's parents, you know were killed by Reno during the game...oh and that poem was beautiful...this whole fic was beautiful...Cloud and Tifa really have alot of kids now it was really long took like 20 mins of my life to read it...i hope this isn't the first of a last cause that would be sad...

Rend
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