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SilverTsuki 2008-09-14 ch 17,	abuse...;_; I'm so sad for Sora. And Namine. All in all though, I still maintain that you are one of the best writers on this site. Your plot just draws me in!! It's great to have another chapter from you.
Johan07 2008-09-08 ch 1,	abuseyay very nice chapters hopin for more to read XD
Lilia Program 2008-09-02 ch 17,	abuseo.o damn, NOW THIS IS HOW THE KINGDOM HEARTS SERIES SHOULD BE! order Square Enix to hire you for plot ideas, you'd be the bomb girl! x3 i'm so glad you returned Ginger Ninja i really missed your work, and you graduated at last you must be so proud =D and you made the perfect chapter to return with too, WEE. poor Sora, Tifa did the right thing, have to admit i was all sad/aw/adorable when she held him right before casting sleep; they work well together as a type of brother sister love, daw PROTECT HIS INNOCENCE GIRL HE'S SO CUTE T.T Tifa: (sticks a dummy in Sora's mouth) you my little baby brother :3 Sora: -.-; (spits it out) TIFA! Tifa: look pal it's either that or the kitty bell! your choice! Sora:...k-kitty bell >.> Tifa: (fangirl scream) x3 being serious the scene in Land of the Dragons shocked me...good going! when it went on about Sora being too young to see all of that, it did actally make me realise "wow he really IS too young to see those horrible things" just never thought of it until now, thanks x3 ^_^ seeing what was happening with the others was great too, glad Kairi and Yuna are going to do something, finally they can scribble out the damsel lable stuck on them and finally kick butt >:3 Kairi: here's the plan, you make cute faces and i knock him on the back of the head while he's distracted _ how can it go wrong!? Yuna:...BUT ITS SORA! WHY DO YOU WANT TO KNOCK HIM OUT!? Kairi: because, b-because i love him, IT'S WHAT COUPLES DO! Yuna: o.o... ...right, well with Roxas and that Shadow, you still got me confused, for one when Sora stabbed himself with the keyblade, how many copys did he make of himself exactly? cause dude if a keyblade can do that, THINK OF WHAT THE SORA COPYS WOULD MAKE ON EBAY! ^^ and yesh, a bit hyper today. sorry if i've got that info wrong, it's been ages since i read this so yeah ^^ looks like something big is going to go down, i wonder how it will all happen :3 and Sora has a scar on his chest from the keyblade? GIVE ME! (picks him up and carries him away) Sora: (wriggles) NOT AGAIN! SOMEONE! HELP ME! Fallen: like i'm helping you, freakin killed me after all >.> everybody knows i'm the hotter one anyway Kairi: (nod) that's right, your fanclub has grown in numbers over the time Ginger Ninja's been away, finally reached the big 10 o.o speaking of which (fangirls charge in and drag Fallen away) Shadow: (ponders) i wonder if i'll get any fangirls after me... Roxas: Axel's your fan Shadow: (shivers) dear god NO! had an awesome time reading your chapter, so can not wait for the next part, then the one after that and so forth (tackle glomps you over) I MISSED YOU! p.s oh oh oh oh! watch Dead Fantasy 2 if you haven't already GN Kairi appears in it fighting with two keyblades it's freakin awsome!
Koorino Megumi 2008-09-01 ch 17,	abuseYay update! And you're over 300 reviews now, too. Congrats! It was lovely to get back into this story. I'm still really interested to see exactly what you do with Naminé and Roxas, considering how the situation that you have them in here differs from the normal game. I can't believe Kairi took Yuna to chase after Sora, though! I mean, I understand why she did it, but oh my gosh. Not a good idea! And Yuna is so young, so... Well, I do hope this gives Yuna a chance to shine, even as a child. Still, alarms are going off in my head! And we have Sora traveling with Tifa and Zidane again! Man, I love the dynamics between those three. But poor Sora, seeing all that carnage! He needs a hug. Good for Zidane and Tifa, getting him out of there. Although making him sleep seemingly wasn't the best course of action... Has he lost his memories now? What's happened? Gah!
Henrika 2008-09-01 ch 17,	abuseYay! Another chapter. Good to see you again. Congratulations on graduating and getting a job, even if it is sucking up all your writing time. It was good to revisit this story and see how all the plotlines are progressing. Thanks for sharing! Keep writing and update soon!
Ezca-hime 2008-09-01 ch 17,	abuseYou're BACK! Yay! Wait...I have finals and I'm reading fanfiction... Then again, I couldn't concentrate if the story I've waited for so long has updated. Oh...can't wait for the next chapter already! But I'll wait anyway. Heh. Thank you thank you thank you!
Iaveina 2008-09-01 ch 17,	abuseWo! You're alive! =D Fantabulous chapter! =D I read it last night...well, early this morning (1am) and I was going to review but I was too tired to form words... ...I woke up with a stinking cold so forming words is still difficult...dammit I had so much I wanted to say too! ^^" I can only remember: Aw to Tifa knocking Sora out to try and protect his innocence!
knux33 2008-09-01 ch 17,	abuseU updated ... tears of joy I'm so happy ... I can't wait to see what happens next, as everyone seems to be going to the same place. 'Dramatic moments' time ... Please, update soon-ish?
Phoenix80hp 2008-09-01 ch 17,	abuseAwesome! You updated! And on my birthday!! I loved it! Though now...i'm not sure what's going to happen anymore...and I love that! I love stories i can't figure out!
Kalrak 2008-08-31 ch 17,	abuseAn update? Huzzah! So... thoughts on this chapter... still no gramatical or punctuational errors; pacing is pretty good. Following the dialogue was easier this chapter, it was a minor issue earlier. Plot-wise things are going where I thought they would. Darkside is an ** as always; Roxas seems to be doing his best to be a tool, and Fallen's stuck with Sora. Namine is doing the Organization's bidding, and Yuna and Kairi are moving towards a war zone. Yep, things are getting dark indeed for our Keyblade wielding friend. I'm estatic to see work on this again. Here's hoping for more frequent updates!
Dragonscall 2008-08-31 ch 17,	abuseYeah! You're back!This was an awesome way to end the summer. Another great chapter. Your writing is just intoxicating. I absolutely adore it. Your characterizations are great and I love the relationships between all the characters. I wish this had really happened in the game, it would have been amazing. I'm a little confused by the Roxas parts or was that your intention? Other than that, your fics are the best I've read. There's no competition. Hopefully you get enough time to get another chapter up soon. Thanks for the awesome read! ~Dragonscall~
LupinandHarry 2008-08-31 ch 17,	abuseOh...My...God... YOU UPDATED!! jumps up and down That is SOO AMAZING!! I'm so HAPPY you are coming back to this story! so so so happy! I hope you continue to update, I hoped that you would continue this story..one day, I guess all my hoping wasn't in vain! SQUE
Manga-Greed 2008-06-26 ch 16,	abuseHeh! The bell finally appears! Though, Lexaeus wasn't one of my favorite Nobodies, I was hoping you would develop him more. Oh well. One more thing, I've taken quite a liking to the trio of Sora, Zidane, and Yuna. Would you mind terribly if I use this formula? I mean, I know Yuna isn't used as much as Tifa (especially in combat scenes) nor will be characterizing Yuna in a child-like form but I still want to use the three in a possible future fic.
Manga-Greed 2008-06-26 ch 15,	abuseGuess I was wrong with Zidane. Oh well. Great chapter nevertheless.
Manga-Greed 2008-06-26 ch 14,	abuseDoes Zidane take a bullet for Kairi?

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