i hope anithene is happy because this is so good. everything is perfect. its like a laboriously painted picture, full of vibranat colors and emotions. i love it. please write more stories!

Oh my god! Simple yet sweet. I totally loved it! The words and the feelings...everything! It's so sweet of Soujiro to say that. Asking Misao to wait for him. If it were me, I'll totally be waiting for him. No matter how long! heheh/. ^P^

GRAET STORY!!

YOU should write more, your style is great. Just make them more mature, not a kids-love

oh,it's not corny,actually I think it's good
Soujirou and Misao's love should be more diffent from KK, more innocent and reckless and...all, unlike KK-the more mature love
I like your writing.

Aww its so sweet! Very nice.

Elemental~

It's a very nice story.
you should practice more, it's not that corny!

NICE FIC!XDXDXDXD

Lovely fic and a lovely Sou/Misao scene. I love the two of them together, and I know I'm really happy you took this challenge. If I could draw well at all, I would be very tempted to draw that romantic scene. Unfortunately I'm in the same boat as you--no artistic talent to speak of. =(
Ah well. I like the last sentence (also the title) and you've really inspired me for some good Sou/Mi lovin'! I'll submit something for the challenge as well--hope you'll read it!

Aww ^^ it was sweet. I liked the little bit og emotion you put into it, but I do have a crit to offer:

1: Your sentences run on. You tend to type out an entire sentence without so much as a comma, an apostraphy, etc etc.
And there are more words in a sentence than needed. Try looking them over and deleting the unneeded ones. Like this one: 'He picked it up and revealed it to be what had probably been the most sakura flower she had ever seen.

If could easily be changed to this: 'He picked it up and it was probably the most perfect flower she had seen.' or something similar. See what I'm saying?

2: Your topics jump. One moment Misao was in the temple, and the next she was outside sitting down. You need to put what happened in between those scenes, even if it's just her getting up and pushing the doors open.

3: More imagery would be nice. I couldn't picture a thing, save the characters and the tree. What color was Misao's kimono and obi? What was the weather, or what did certain things feel like? Was her kimono soft (it was tight, yes) or rough? You don't need to go into headache inducing detail, but certainly more than what you have.

In any case, I did like reading it, and it gave a nice fluffy feel ^^ thanks a lot for writing this!