 Chloe McMurray 2008-03-20 . chapter 7:) |
 Chloe McMurray 2008-03-20 . chapter 8Please tell me youre still continueing this story. Hope you update soon. |
 myshadowspirit 2008-01-18 . chapter 8This chapter was so adoable and sweet! Except for the whole 'Marie' thing. I would personally want Warren to be with his e-girlfriend and Rough and Bobby back together, but (sigh) it' your story. (rolls eyes) |
 myshadowspirit 2008-01-18 . chapter 7Well, this chapter was sweet but there was some spelling issues. One, you forgot a 'to' after used in one of the sentences. and you also said he let one of hi wings fall, when I'm pretty sure you ment feather. I'd find it alarming if I giant wing fell at my feet. (^^)
And poor Waren would probably fall from the sky |
 myshadowspirit 2008-01-18 . chapter 6Ok . . . ignoring the fact that I hate that you made Rouge and Bobby break up . . .
I don't think Rouge would be so ok with this. Even if she thought it was for the best. In the second movie, she Bobby really did love each other. Even is they don't love wach other anymore, she still should feel sad and miss how things used to be.
Bobby disapering brings in suspence. I hope he's ok, since I like Bobby. |
 lily1121 2007-01-16 . chapter 5please update soon i love this story |
 myshadowspirit 2007-01-08 . chapter 5. . . I don't really know what to say. . . except . WHY DO YOU HATE BOBBY!?!?!?!?!?! Casey says she doesn't understand either |
 DeltaGamma Liv 2006-11-08 . chapter 4aww i am a total ROGEL fan now so i really like reading this story. hopefully you will update soon because i jsut recently got into this pairing and there aren't that many stories focusing on them. and i am especially pissed cuz the movie didn't pay that much tribute to either of their characters. good luck with the writing, can't wait for more!
~liv |
 TinaKnightofCydonia 2006-10-17 . chapter 4aww how cute!! i love anngel you make him sound like the greatest guy in the world!! greaT!! |
 Dybdahl 2006-08-10 . chapter 4that's so sweet |
 articuno13 2006-07-31 . chapter 4aw...
cute! |
 myshadowspirit 2006-07-29 . chapter 4Even though this chapter was short the detail was better and even out though out the whole thing. I think this was better written then the last one. I'm proud of you.
AND . . . You don't need to kiss each other to be in truley in love! Love isn't only about physical stuff!! It's called 'self controle' I think Marie needs to contole her hormone inpules. AND . . . Bobby's better then Warren AND John PUT TOGETHER!! GLARE! |
 myshadowspirit 2006-07-29 . chapter 3Detail has gotten better. You lack detail on the movie scenes (I know, I know, if they are reading this they probably already seen the movie, but it would make things flow better. And maybe they forgot. I have. And by the way we totoally need to see that mvie agian)
sigh and . . . WHY DON"T YOU LIKE BOBBY! If you have Kitty go with John (which I have no problem with and I kinda like the idea.) and have Marie go with WARREN then BOBBY WILL BE ALL ALONE! glare. Yes, I'm going to fight you on this one. Even if it's a loseing battle. |
 jade598 2006-07-27 . chapter 4yay i love this its really good please update asap i cant wait |
 TheSouthernBelle 2006-06-29 . chapter 4Great story... Please continue! |