I love reading stories from the perspective of the covenant. It gives you a whole new look on everything about the Halo franchises. I'm going to have to go read the rest of this series now. Hopefully it'll be of the same caliber of what you've written here.

Oh, I get it. You gave the Covenant their own military alphabet: Blessed instead of Bravo, Godly instead of Golf, and so on. That was wicked clever. You are really good at this I'm impressed.

And by the way, also drop by and read my stories, this is my first time so any helpful comments would help me alot:)

About the field master saying Excellency to Orine:Field Masters are zealots and far surpass ultras in rank.

"one couldn't fire a plasma weapon inside a methane-filled room, otherwise it would ignite and explode in a very violent manner."

The atmosphere has to have at least 15% oxygen for fire to propagate. I don't know much about Unggoy's respiratory systems (no one does) other than that they breathe methane, but I don't think they'd need oxygen. It might be possible that they exhale oxygen, but that seems unlikely. So, if they don't need oxygen, I doubt there would be much oxygen in the air. Now, I haven't actually conducted an experiment, but I doubt fire would be able to exist at all in a 100% methane environment.

In other words, the Unggoy's habitation chamber would probably have nearly 100% methane or the remainder of the air would consist of a gas like nitrogen. If that's the case, firing a plasma weapon inside would not cause anything to explode. Fire wouldn't even be able to burn. You wouldn't even be able to light a match in such an environment.

Also, there would undoubtedly be airlocks and decontamination procedures so the air inside the chamber cant escape an the air outside can't enter. There could also be a selectively-permeable forcefield at the entrance, but I don't know if the Covenant have such technology. After all, they have to lower their hangars' shields to allow craft to enter/exit, unlike the forcefields in Star Wars, so perhaps they haven't successfully replicated Forerunner forcefield technology.

Other than that minor mistake (most people don't realize pure Methane isn't actually flammable) and the lack of detail concerning the entry/exit method of the Unggoy barracks, it was a good chapter.

YEah that was so badass!

wow i loved this story, you planing to make any more?

very good story

This was my first story i read on this website and i feel i may have started with the best. I am a big halo fan and your story could easily be mistaken an offical part of the halo story.

He's alive! Joy of joys, he's alive!

That's right, you get your revenge on those monkey sonsabitches!

Nice chapter.

Hope to see the Flood and the MC soon.

Keep it up.

Not only is this one of the best Halo fanfictions I have ever read, it's one of the best fanfics period that I have read. Very accurate, well written, and all around enjoyable.

There are, of course, some minor deviations from the Halo canon, but all in all, you have an outstanding story here. Can't wait for the next installment.

*Adds to favorites*

This is like really really good. Better than the first, if I may be so bold. But, something's been nagging at me for a while now...is Oriné really truly dead? I think I'm in denial about that.

You like to start your stories in space, dontcha boy? At least you havn't killed all of your characters yet... But I digress, keep it up, bro.