This first version is a lot better than the revised one.. I loved this story, it's one of the best I've recently seen. Please, update it (and also the Original Team Rocket).

Does noone like to review? anyway please continue it is very interesting and good so keep up the good work

arg...did ya really have to kill off the Elite Four and put Ash as the hero? I hate ya spelling...It would have been OK by me if ya killed off ONE of th E4...Hate this... :( I will critzize no more...YA BETTER REVIVE THEM! I LOVE THE E4! I will get out now...before I say a bad word...:(

ouch, poor um.. heroes and heroine! How are they going to get out of this one?

Hmm, it's okay, but the spelling and confusing of those similar words, like there and their, is annoying.

*jumps up and down* Please continue please continue!

Hey old friend, if you dont know who I am I'll tell you at school later. I have been leting you bounce ideas of me and have been giving you ideas so I figuted I would read the real story you finally posted. Spellcheck Mr. Frog (if you dont know who I am now you are gonna get hit so hard later), also you need to work on puncuation when people are talking, and add a little more deatail in the descriptions. Oh and no one bug me about the future chapters, I won't tell. But I will tell you that Mewtwo will make a apperence later in the story. See ya Mr. Skully. :P

Please do update! Please?

hey, really interesting story but you need to work on your spelling and grammar - ie, johto, not johjoh. But, neat.

I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT! I had a sneaking suspicion it was Jack since I finished reading another one of your fics. I've just been waiting for you to admit it! Now, it took you absolutely forever to upload this chapter, and I sincerely HOPE that the next one will be coming along sooner. KAY! Good! And if you refuse I may just need to use Lightning.

Lightning: RAI-AI!

I know who he is!, not the question is how did he get his power.

I've read the other reviews and

it seems the people woundering who Jack is.

need to read Shadow of the past.

Okay story, lack of much action or drama in it but I'm wondering who is Jack ? A new character or a character from the anime ? I'll be interested in the answer.

so thats who he is.

Joy-girl read his other story Shadow of the past.

And am I supposed to know who 'Jack' is? Very interesting, it almost makes me wonder if kain actually has a slight good side. What happened tot he tests that were done on misty And last but not least, CONTINUE SOON PLEASE!