That's cute, too. And very true. Good job, yet again. =D

Hey, that's cute. Really good for an eight year old. I didn't start writing 'til I was...I dunno. Probably 10 or 12...
But yeah. That's cute. Good job. =D

That's nice a nice poem for an 8 year old.

Aw that was very cute! I can't write poems. Most of them turn out like "I have a Cat who's name is Sue, he likes to sleep in a shoe", you know...lame things like that...
My cat's name isn't sue, by the by...
Ok that was random.
Have a nice day.
''Poo

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Nice story! fol (fart out loud) BANG! your computer has now self destructed!

Whoa! Sweet and stof! I guess this really triggered you to write this...not bad for an 8-year old..i bet i couldn't even right that if i were still in that age! Berry cute! LOL! Advance Merry Christmas dude! God bless ya!

It's cute.

Great poem!

Jesus approves, lol.

yay! Happy Birthday, Jesus! love it!
lots of love, God bless.

Awesome poem, it brought a smile to my face. Just pure and simple in all of its entirety. Take care and God Bless.

~PJ~