 ShadowHeart251 2008-10-13 . chapter 1Love it. It has a sense of flow and it's worded quite well. Thanks for listening |
 Illucida 2008-07-09 . chapter 1"Blind Spot" was lovely to read. You did a great job. |
 Seriously Yours 2008-05-20 . chapter 1So beautiful :P |
 kakashifan7 2008-03-09 . chapter 1That was a cool story. I like ur writing style. |
 In Darkness Is Light 2008-03-03 . chapter 1Great introspective piece.
Your one-shot brilliantly progresses through the times of Kakashi's life and it's nice to see how everyone thinks his blind spot is a different one. I think that Kakashi really does have all those blind-spots though and you've not only brought out his charater, but all the other characters mentioned in this fic as well. By having them each think of Kakashi's blind spot as something different, it gives insight to their personalities, beliefs and opinions as well. I also liked how you made Kakashi briefly analyze his own blindspot at the end.
Amazing job. Keep it up. |
 Lin 2008-03-01 . chapter 1 Pretty nice. If indeed you did this from the morass of writer's block, I honor you; about all I can ever get done in that situation is cleaning the kitchen floor. Sometime in the future, when the block has finally dissolved, I'd really like to see this fleshed out with dialogue. Maybe. These one-shots are hothouse flowers, and once you have them rooted you never know if they'll bloom or wither. The rootling was quite nice, though. |
 Wassermagierin 2007-11-01 . chapter 1I really like it. Especially because you switched the Point of View to people who know Kakashi more or less well. Great job.
P.S. Yeah, it's his left eye. |
 Blue Jeans 2007-08-05 . chapter 1Love it.
:D
I like how it's focused more on how others view Kakashi than really Kakashi thinking about himself. He does, but it's more interesting coming from everyone else ;)
Nicely done! |
 CherryBlossoms38 2007-08-03 . chapter 1So cool! Very, very well written. Great job! |
 just a rambling romantic 2007-01-14 . chapter 1-love and adoration pouring in from all sides- That was great! Your writing style is just... I don't know, it just IS! Anyway, I loved the story, keep up the good work! |
 theREvamped 2006-10-08 . chapter 1It's...late. Ridiculously late. Six-in-the-morning-late. Any review I give you now will be really really really bad. But, you know, I can't help myself, so sorry about this: It's choppy. I felt as if I was reading a composite of different ideas, not a smoothed out writing. Maybe you wanted it like that...I don't know - I'm not really thinking clearly right now. |
 Endril Lei 2006-10-05 . chapter 1 That was extremely well done! what a nice concept, very touching, and original. The writing style was really fitting for the piece, and the characterization was really good. Something about it was just really striking. Good job, I really enjoyed it, and that's hard to say on this site. |
 Guile 2006-09-10 . chapter 1I like it, especially how you tied the whole thing together with the overarching theme of his 'blind spot'. Good stuff. |
 ElasticBobaTurtle 2006-09-10 . chapter 1Mm, this is beautiful introspective piece. :) It's great how you evaluate each nuance of his character and how affects the other characters, as well. Great piece. |
 PsychoLeopard 2006-09-09 . chapter 1Simply lovely. Love it. |