excellent story loved it

I think that you sould write a sequel to this, it was really good!

I think you can put pancake making on hold for awhile. This is a great read. Snickers too.

This was an amazing story. I loved all the different elements you wrotr into it.

forget the pancakes and keep the computer!

this was really good. don't sell ure computer! i'll probably be the first to do so...but (knocks on wood) don't even think bout that!

No! Don't make pancakes-the pancakes can wait! Reviewers can't!

Loved it! Hope you write more in the near future!

i'm sure your pancakes are good but your story is even better

Don't sell your computer, this is really, really, really good. I'm a diehard Snickers. I really love this story. I hope you write some more.

Cuteness! I love how Nick woke up Sara and the ending was awesome. I hope you write more Snickers!

Nah - though if you make pancakes as well as you write, it's gonna be a mighty good pancake. :o) I'm a diehard GSR shipper - always have been - but I did enjoy this story. Thanks for a good read.

WOW that was really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really good lol, are you going to write another chap?

Very very good. I just loved it. Can't wait for more.

LOVED IT! awesome for a first story, you so have to write more snicker stories :D

hey love the syory very different its great just wondering if ay were gonna carry on with it hope ya do very cool xx