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Micuko
2007-10-24
ch 1,
abuseOmg, weird! But i liked it^^
akari-hayashi
2006-12-19
ch 1,
abuseWow, that is... interesting... Kinda OOC for Horo though.
tictacOrange
2006-11-01
ch 1, anon.
abusewah... so emo.. but so god >.< ... never thot of cutting like that b4... HORO!
Ayaka
2006-10-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt was kind of creepy. I never really think of Horo to be the type of person to think like that. (Did that sentance make sence?) He just seems so happy... of course, that could always be an act, but still. Keep writing :) I enjoyed it.
Aoi Umenokouji
2006-09-23
ch 1,
abuseAoi Umenokouji here. Still remember me?

My, such an interesting fic you have here. Psychotic in a way, yes? Me likes that...
Horo is indeed a bit mental in this one. Almost makes one think of him as a murderer, a sadist.

Ah, how I admire your will to create and continue your fics, Nirah. Somehow, I can't find it in myself to continue my fic...

Though of course I still want to...

Would a great author such as yourself be kind enough to give tips on how to regain inspiration?

I thank ye.

Aoi.
Jaded Autumn
2006-07-12
ch 1,
abuseOh...I love it... That was so cool. I liked the part with the bleeding clouds and the bleeding moon and how he used to think of them as tears... It was cool when he jumped into the water and his blood was blue and then Ren was like "you're so clumsy" and Horo was just like "...Clumsy..." and then at the end ^-^ I love it "Ren oyu;re so clumsy" even though it's like weirdy it's killer! Awesome, wicked, excellent, beautiful, wonderful, lovely, AND SO MUCH MORE! Because I love Horo...But I love Ren. Oh, I love them both! Know what was funny? I read Loo Confessions a while ago (I cant remember if I reviewed) and then I came back and started reading your stuff now, and I was scrolling though the list of stuff and I saw it, and I was like...LOL! Oh my god, it's the same person! Because Loo Confessions was the first Shaman King fic I had read, so you were like...my shaman king fic devirginizer...Or something... ha ha, anyway, I loved it. ^-^
--Autum
The-Pain-Of-A-Lost-Soul
2006-07-10
ch 1,
abuseawsome i like the water filling yp the room scene its cool!
wow horo has some imagination ^^
it was really good
Ashen Phoenix
2006-07-08
ch 1,
abuseWow... That was SERIOUSLY scary! O.O I never suspected the psycho, thinking of dying as beautiful, to be HORO~!! Woah.

I thought, somehow, he was gonna kill Ren at the end... Creepy as hell! Nice work! *shudders*
Holy'Shrimp
2006-06-28
ch 1,
abusehey, actually... it's really too weird xD but cute in the same time ^v^ Ren can do EVERYTHING beautifully è_é hehe but Horo is really nice too!! why does he think of himself as if he really was ugly? oh... poor little Horo-chan... é_è
it was really nice ^v^ hehe thanx for this fic ^0^
TaoSan
2006-06-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseI stumbled upon this story just now, how is it possible?!>_<
Oh well..."WOW" is all I can say right now...
It was SO weird, and I like weird things.
It was like from another dimension, or something. ^_^
Those Horo's psycho thoughts at the beginnig were (Oh no, I'm lacking English to describe that XP) beautifully filled with my favourite Nirah-ish mystery.
It was pleasure to read!
San^_^
ShamanLover
2006-06-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, that was creepy...I thought it was very well described though. Despite the "creepy-ness" I really did like it...the end part just about gave me shivers!

ShamanLover
Cenarias of Sapphire
2006-06-24
ch 1,
abuseYup, he's so clumsy.:D
Nice job!:D
Atari-chan
2006-06-24
ch 1,
abuseI'm... not exactly sure what happened just then. I do know, however, that there is oxygen in water and so blood would still be red. Sorry. That was an incredibly mesmerising piece, though. I couldn't stop reading it >_< So pretty...
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Kare4me
2006-06-24
ch 1,
abuseClumsy

its a little wierd but it made me cry!

i was like WTF?

somehow it made me cry...
bittersweet
Lapse - Raevn
2006-06-23
ch 1,
abuseI loved it. It was just so beautiful and odd and mesmerizing in it's own little way that I couldn't stop reading until it was over. And I like Horo's 'insight' in this one a lot. And Ren's part in it all. :3 I don't know what else to say. xD Lovely.
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