 Anthony1l 8/22/11 . chapter 1This story is heart-breaking, interesting, original, tear-jerking, and unique. |
 anon 5/7/11 . chapter 1 Good, but one error. Pikachu is male. There's so much evidence it's not funny. I mean, no tail dent, attract from girl pokémon working, saying 'he' in both the Japanese and american versions, the list goes on. Why do so many people think he's a girl? |
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 Yamamori Amaya 4/16/02 . chapter 1Man-you-are-obsessed-with-death-and-ghosts-coming-back-Riny-chan! LOL, sorry, I couldn't resist. Good job! I loved the plot twist. At first, I though that Lily or someone had died...but I was wrong! |
 starbuzzedu2 3/23/02 . chapter 1 A huge wave came over me, but it didn't just hold
sadness, it also held relief. All I can say is
that was beautiful. |
 Jessiejames 2/18/02 . chapter 1:**-( *starts sobbing* Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Why'd you kill Ash?
Great story though! |
 evm 12/25/01 . chapter 1How sad! |
 Fletset 11/17/01 . chapter 1Wow...that was so great...it's the second time I'm reading this, only now I'm able to review _. |
 ShadowTrainer 9/29/01 . chapter 1 That's som'ut like Forever. I love your stories. |
 Joey Oak 9/22/01 . chapter 1 Great fic! I like it but it's sad. Poor Ash... At first I thought it was Gary who died and then I remembered that Gary was training at mount silver in my fic. Heh heh... Stooge on me! ;; |
 Kitty Meow 9/17/01 . chapter 1*sniff* how could you seperate the most bestest (is that a word?) pair in Pokémon? Ahhhh! |
 yg 9/7/01 . chapter 1 awesome story again! |
 Vickie211 6/7/01 . chapter 1You're the master of mush, Riny! That was so beautiful. I feel like I was right there crying with Misty. I can't say anymore. I have to go cry some more. Bravo! |
 The Demon Princess 6/7/01 . chapter 1*sobb* |
 Soul of a Wolf 6/4/01 . chapter 1*sniffles* That was sad, but it was really good. For a while, I couldn't figure out who had died! |