This story is heart-breaking, interesting, original, tear-jerking, and unique.

Good, but one error. Pikachu is male. There's so much evidence it's not funny. I mean, no tail dent, attract from girl pokémon working, saying 'he' in both the Japanese and american versions, the list goes on. Why do so many people think he's a girl?

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WAH!

Man-you-are-obsessed-with-death-and-ghosts-coming-back-Riny-chan! LOL, sorry, I couldn't resist. Good job! I loved the plot twist. At first, I though that Lily or someone had died...but I was wrong!

A huge wave came over me, but it didn't just hold

sadness, it also held relief. All I can say is

that was beautiful.

:**-( *starts sobbing* Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Why'd you kill Ash?

Great story though!

How sad!

Wow...that was so great...it's the second time I'm reading this, only now I'm able to review _.

That's som'ut like Forever. I love your stories.

Great fic! I like it but it's sad. Poor Ash... At first I thought it was Gary who died and then I remembered that Gary was training at mount silver in my fic. Heh heh... Stooge on me! ;;

*sniff* how could you seperate the most bestest (is that a word?) pair in Pokémon? Ahhhh!

awesome story again!

You're the master of mush, Riny! That was so beautiful. I feel like I was right there crying with Misty. I can't say anymore. I have to go cry some more. Bravo!

*sobb*

*sniffles* That was sad, but it was really good. For a while, I couldn't figure out who had died!