I love the story. It's brilliant. I don't think I have seen many stories where the twins discover their past... their parents' past, to be exact.

0oh this sounds really good. Are Han, Luke, and Leia going to go to the past and will the twins meet their parents? Anyway please update soon.

LOVE IT! CONTINUE PLEASE!

I would have put some basic information about Padme and Anakin down and I would have revealed in the entry that Anakin's father was unknown and possibly the Force. But that's me not you.

A good fic all around though.

These aren't chapters, these are paragraphs. And confusing ones at that.

Interesting start. I like the premise of your story. The formatting of your story needs some work though for future chapters, because a story is hard to read when it is just long paragraphs. Looking forward to reading more.

Please update! I'm curious to see where you're going with this. :)