Lovely chapter, Kya-chan. I can hardly wait for the next one.

- Andy

Lovely chapter as always, Kya. n_n
The flow of everything is perfect. There's a nice use of suspense, and the whole thing is adorable. And smexy. And just damn gorgeous in general.
To summarize: Kya = win.

OMG YES LOGIN IS FIXED.

Anyways, I loved it, dear. It was beautifully written and incredibly smexy.

Oh Kya. It was gorgeous. You are such a beautiful writer.

Your writings never cease to amaze me, love.

OMG Kya-chan! This chapter was so good! I have half a mind to give up writing. Compared to you I suck. -sniff-

It was seriously very good. I liked the part when Axel made Xayra mad. That was so hilarious! Axel's so tactless sometimes. xD And I loved the pomigranite part for some reason. I guess because I love that fruit, except I don't like the crazy, lethal-staining juice. Last time I ate one, it looked like there was a murder on the sidewalk outside my house.

I can't wait for the next chapter. It's gonna be great, I can tell. =) Please update soon! I really can't wait! I'll die if I'm deprived of my Axel-san for too long!

- Andy-chan

Omg Kya I loved it. I love the wasabi part. xD You are such a good writer.

Quite entertaining. :)

But to make a little suggestion: next time, have Xayra's voice consistent. It's like her attitude/personality changes too much - from formality to using words like "**", etc. Lol. Y'know? It sounds sorta weird - the transition made was a bit too fast.

In any case, I'll be anticipating your 15th chapter.

My gosh, what took so long? I totally missed reading your story, and I hated the horrible three-month-long wait! You are so good at torturing me! ;-;

Anyways, I totally loved this chapter. Especially the way you used the 'Pink kitty' thing. You have given that insult a new name! -crazy music-

Please update soon. I really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,REALLY want to read the next chapter. So... If you don't update soon, I will be forced to hunt you down and devour your soul! >D

- Andy

OMG YOU UPDATED!! =D I loved the pink kitty thing. xD I'm glad you used it.

And what are Axel and Xayra up to? O_O

Okay, okay, okay. This fan fic is, AWESOME! It's one of the best I've ever read. Your characters come alive! I can really feel them! It's almost like I know each one of them, and yet, they're all a mystery, especially Xayra. I can't believe stupid Rixushin is preventing her from getting Axel! I would SO dump Rixushin for Axel! OMG!! I'm spazzing out!

Okay, sorry about that. Anyways, this fic is the BEST I've ever read. It's awesome, and I can HARDLY wait until you update. Please do so soon!

And, Larxene was mean to Demmy-chan! She needs to die! She called him a stupid **! How could she insult poor Demmy that way? Demmy's too cute to insult! -deep breath- Like I said, Larxene needs to die. -glare-

GACK! I LOVE YOU! *hands cookies and axel plushies*
You are *The* best author ever! I got the chapter update email and went absolutely nuts. I was cacking myself laughing in the Axel-boxer bit... me AND my friend, whom I sent the link to.

MUST UPDATE!
*huggles*
Cyah~

OMG!! THAT WAS SO FREAKIN AWESOME!! SQUE! Omg Kya chan you rock so hard at making love scenes ;D keep writing kay?

ZOMG i loved this chapter, it was like 3 in the morning and im sure i woke my family up with my uncontrollable laughter XD
PLEASE update, i cant wait for the next chappies XD
lol i would never have imagined axel with low alcohol tolerance, but hes still in character ;)

laters~

ok I'm mad! I want to see xayra and axel get together allready stupid broad had to point out the same thing I mentioned earlier... no love aye? they so have love axel should so get a heart and they become normal people and have children and be happy... happy endings are for saps though, huh? lol