 Bobette13 2009-11-21 . chapter 8eeigh your characters are very bland, the writing of each is interchangeable. harry and draco are getting along way too easily, especially since both should be majorly stressed from thier respective shocking changes.
neat idea, but i think you focused more on what to write (aka the plot) then how to write it. |
 Sharingan-Youkai. 2009-11-18 . chapter 18you know you don't have to delete all the lemons, if it's rated M it's for a reason right? Come on! Other then that, I love it! |
 im rad bby 2009-11-09 . chapter 38i loved it (: |
 Rori Potter 2009-10-09 . chapter 38That was amazing. |
 Rori Potter 2009-10-09 . chapter 17That was great. |
 paris barud 2009-10-02 . chapter 38nice. |
 takuya 2009-09-27 . chapter 38oh i really liked that story a really page turner |
 GeorgieGirl999 2009-09-08 . chapter 38aw! this is so sweet! good job! |
 Eagle-Eyes 2009-08-17 . chapter 38This is an extremely good story. I plan to locate and read others you have written -- or will write in the future. |
 Anne399 2009-08-13 . chapter 38Fantastic story! |
 animelvr23 2009-07-28 . chapter 38Aww that was ssuch a beautiful story! FAV!! ja ne!~ |
 snowangel66 2009-07-14 . chapter 38i love this story so much, XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD |
 love.for.a.lifetime 2009-06-06 . chapter 38 hm well i must admit although i do love this story there were some scenes that were a tad disturbing...a threesome INCLUDING snape...*shudder* not something i really want to picture lol. |
 Strawberrychan1 Ichigochan1 2009-05-26 . chapter 38great story lov it *cookies to author* |
 Katanagirl16 2009-05-14 . chapter 12=D |