eeigh your characters are very bland, the writing of each is interchangeable. harry and draco are getting along way too easily, especially since both should be majorly stressed from thier respective shocking changes.

neat idea, but i think you focused more on what to write (aka the plot) then how to write it.

you know you don't have to delete all the lemons, if it's rated M it's for a reason right? Come on! Other then that, I love it!

i loved it (:

That was amazing.

That was great.

nice.

oh i really liked that story a really page turner

aw! this is so sweet! good job!

This is an extremely good story. I plan to locate and read others you have written -- or will write in the future.

Fantastic story!

Aww that was ssuch a beautiful story! FAV!! ja ne!~

i love this story so much, XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD

hm well i must admit although i do love this story there were some scenes that were a tad disturbing...a threesome INCLUDING snape...*shudder* not something i really want to picture lol.

great story lov it *cookies to author*

=D