THIS.

This is so perfect and good.

I only just finished reading this book. It struck the biggest chord with me, don't know what it was but it sticks, even now...even hours after my eyes passed over that last word. Can I just say that despite the short length, despite the fact that it's not King's text - I'm so happy this story wasn't compromised...bastardized if you will. Your style is so alike to his. The reason I knew that is not because I paid close attention to your words but because it struck the same chord. Good old Pete McVries. He's back as I pictured him in the Long Walk. My only criticism is that I wish this was longer, elaborated a bit more on Pete. Thanks :)

... Wow. Just wow. I love how you captured the tenseness/mood in the book. I could see this fitting in quite well. ^^ And the way you portrayed Garraty? Just beautiful.

Oh my god, I love you!
Long Walk fic = love.

Your writing = love.

Keep up the good work!