I liked Jayne's version of the story very much! Especially the part where charming mercenary takes out Prince Charming.

Completely plausible and thoroughly enjoyable! But now I'm curious as to how "Snow White" would spin the tale...

This Snow Whte retelling was every inch a Jayne story - perfect! :)
~Ultra~

Oh, wow, that was great. I don't read Firefly fanfics very often, but I stumbled across this one and I just had too. This is really good. I'm going to have to show it to my friend who really likes Rayne fics. :)

That made me laugh so hard I choked! Awesome. You got Jayne just right here.

-Ellie

Oh my Goddess, I'm so telling my kids this version of Snow White. It's so very much better then the original.

Heh, that was humorous!

Oh, that was funny! Gotta love the humor in that! I'm not really into River and Jayne pairings, I like Jayne and Kaylee pairings better, but that was funny!

LOL! I love it! IT IS AWEMAZING (awesome+amazing), and I must say that I like Jayne's version of the story a lot better than the real one!

haha very funny i love Jayne's version on Snow white. :D

Hehehehe so cute! *squee* Loved it. Please Jayne-ify another fairytale, just because it's SO funny. Brilliant!

That would be a jayne story!

This made me smile!

naw. that's so gorgeous. I love the end. hehe

oh, no! a fairy tale jaynefied. XDD oh, but this was so sweet, and so in character on jayne's part. -hugs him- really, how can you not love him?

-druidess.sieya