Disturbing,but kind of interesting in a morbid kinda way.

this story is sick and perverted the 1st chap wasnt as bad but the rest wwas just disgusting... i dint even mean to add u to my fave story list

I really liked this story, I just didn't like the trap with the collars. Couldn't they have just sucked up some of the blood from five of the people and spit it into the hallway?

im sorry but i nearly busted a gut at the ending you should totally make a shot sequal

wtf? This fic is very interesting. The ending kinda kracked me up. Also the end didn't make any sense. loved it anyways.

-stare-

What the **?

There, there are no words. Seriously. I can't think of a single thing to say, except 'What the **?'. And I'm not even sure what tone I'd use. All I know is I am completely baffled. Congratulations, you have just totally thrown me.

great story, i enjoyed reading it.

Oh, now that was superb. I personally enjoyed the part where the Tweebs were hacking each others legs off, then ended up painting the walls (who knew they liked renovating?). So friggin' funny. The ending left me hanging though, and I thought, "Okay, we ended up here why?" Meh, I guess I can't complain too much, it WAS good after all, and I now feel obliged to look at more of your work.

Virtually anything is crossed with "Saw" immediately sends warning klaxons off in my head, but I can say that this pleasantly surprised. Although the whole situation was rather contrived (Pirahna DNA? Pirahna... DNA...??), it managed to remain funny and entertaining throughout. (Have to love the "diamond-tipped shovel" comment, although I can't really figure out why...)

The ending, however...

*SPOILERS AHEAD*

I went through this entire story to arrive at THAT conclusion? It wasn't ironic, it wasn't funny, it was just a bit of inexplicable stupidity, on hideous par with the whole "it was a dream" cop-out. Something in that direction might have turned out to be a funny and ironic, but as it is, it was just a "let's-have-Shego-and-Kim-perform-aribitrary-and-no-doubt-horrifically-gooey-lesbianism" ending, with no evident thought in it whatsoever.

In summation: The story was good, but the ending ruined it. Now, I must check out your other stuff. I'm off!

Am I the only person who found this more funny than gory?
"Oh, diamond-tipped shovel…What won’t you cut through" XD

Dude, that rocked! I also loved prelennor and all your other stories, but this one was hilarious! Nice plot twist ending, though. Who did end up being the one in charge?

*blinks*
...*faints*

okay...

Barkin: “Sorry, fella…But I’m a soldier. First thing we’re trained to do is stay alive. Which is why I killed him, and why I’m killing you…with my shovel. Also, I’m…just getting tired of the whole “seriously” thing.”

I just about had a laughing fit when I read that... seriously! Then Betty and Adrena! That just about took the cake but Larry and Justine trumped it all. Sick and wrong has a whole new meaning starting today!
Thanks for the sick and twisted read and I mean that in a good way!

holy crap. i read the challenge for this and think it's absolutely awesome!! god, you rock.