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jimmycranberry
2008-06-04 . chapter 13
hilarious story, great fun to read! also loving the descriptions of Cloud's confusion... i suppose having a crazed yuffie set on you would do that...

please update! how could you stop there and not add another chapter?!?
Hiroen Nnir
2008-03-17 . chapter 13
wow!
this was fun to read!
there were parts that were
realy fun to read but
there were some parts that were
a bit off
sorry
but i cant wait for
an up-date!
Ash of greenfire
2008-01-04 . chapter 13
Great story! Complete Mushyness... And so funny...
Mr. Nice Guy
2008-01-03 . chapter 13
I really hope you update soon. I would hate to see this become an abandoned fic.
Dragonsfire07
2007-10-11 . chapter 13
Things get interesting? How? I Want to know... good story though...
pepsilexxi
2007-07-20 . chapter 13
Oh my goodness! This has to be my favorite CloudxYuffie fanfic yet! It's so amazing! You're a great author and are extremely funny as well! This is really an awesome story, so please update soon! Can't wait!
AngelicCrossplay
2007-06-25 . chapter 13
cloud loves his nipples. OMG. xD
Now that was hilarious!
Sorry I didn't review the other chapters, I guess I forgot -.- *is shot* But I am right now, see?
I thought the type question was great. "Cloud." :D That was a very good move! Now what's going to happen? I'm very curious.
As always, you are great. Update when you can!
-rei
SoraXNamine
2007-06-23 . chapter 13
please update this- its really good! CXY forever!
E. 0rchid
2007-05-25 . chapter 12
YES! Finally some major updates! A little on the short side, but hey it's better then nothing and it's quick. Keep up the great work, hope u udpate soon!

"Deep into that darkness peering long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before"-Edgar Allen Poe

Where Does the Darkness Reside
SoraXNamine
2007-05-22 . chapter 12
please update- i really like where this is going
Kaikai PANTS
2007-05-20 . chapter 12
oh this one was so kyute :3
[kai nearly forgot to review this chapter ^^"]

yes. LE GASP. it is the end of the world, i had previously got bored of ficts lol.

but not this one, cos this fiction KICKS ASS. :D t'was exceptional with a whip of wonderful humour. whats not to love about this story.
Kaikai PANTS
2007-05-19 . chapter 11
wow. u ARE on a role xD
lemme steal some of ur creativity !
i wanna lick cloud favourite ice cream too :P

but yes, this was so funny & well written.
& i was actually on a major hiatus, cos got kinda boring...so im glad that this super awesome story has gotten me back into fanfics.
thank yoo.
to the next chap~! *stares off into the distance*

x.
Kaikai PANTS
2007-05-19 . chapter 10
*flails*
I WANT CLOUD'S CHOCOBO BOXERS TOO DAMNIT >:3
lol. *pounces*
loved this chapter to BITS.
it was so hilarious;
on to the next one~

Lady Da Qiao of Wu
2007-05-17 . chapter 12
YAY! An update! I love this story. So kyoot.


lovieta
2007-05-16 . chapter 11
OMG YOU UPDATED!

the Transformers bit was awesome because today at lunch I had a friend who started to sing the theme song, and yeah.

I love the chocobo boxers! And the shopping trip was awesome, so was the OOC comment.

The kiss was so cute and I love it and i love this fic and clouffie and you for writing this fic.
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