Woah evil Harry. Cool story:) Was it Ginny who he killed?

ToffeeRose

I...I don't know what to think.

This line got to me: "He had faced those eyes many times before, each time waving them off without another thought."

Because I thought it was Bellatrix there...so this bit about the eyes confused me. Was it her? If so, what did you mean?

The rest is amazing (of course).

A crazy idea, executed beautifully.

So this particular Harry understood Voldemort better than he thought. Who was the woman? I like how a dark Harry wanted nothing more than to destroy everything. There would be nothing to hurt him, then. Well, written.

I love it. Dark!Harry

I won't say you don't write well, but what's going on? Did Voldemort and Harry switch bodies or something? I mean either you say you are writing an AU or ...Harry is randomly out of character here though you wrote quite well.