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Conterra-san
2008-08-17 . chapter 8
hahah i liked that ending.

"mutual agreement" it just made sense in context.

good job!

~C
Conterra-san
2008-08-17 . chapter 5
hahhahaha the end confusion was pretty awesome.

also, the bit when Derek was like "Quick question," it was so typical Derek I loved it. even if it was small.

hahaha. so this was great.

~C
Conterra-san
2008-08-17 . chapter 4
eep!

this is awesome! lol i love how awkward it is reading fan fic for people you can see being real people in your head, if you catch my drift.

lol and i love this derek and sam dynamic it is swet

~C
wprincessannw
2008-07-12 . chapter 8
Love it!
Halle Alexis
2008-06-23 . chapter 8
loved it
alwaysandforever08
2008-06-21 . chapter 8
I just started reading this today, and I LOVE it! Amazing job! I love how you explained Derek and Casey's emotions so clearly. It was like I was in their shoes.
MaybeBaby27
2008-02-22 . chapter 5
So I hate review in the middle of a completed story but I felt the need to say something before I forget. I love how you write Casey's stream of consciousness. I love that you have her thinking completely different things then what she's saying. And I love that even thought you're basically writing 'I like Derek. Ew. Wait. no. yes I do.' (just as an example I know it's not there yet) it's doesn't sound cliche or out of place like it does when most people write thoughts.

So congrats on excellent writing. And in case you couldn't tell I've just basically spent my whole evening reading/rereading through your LWD stories so obviously I like your stuff. Kudos!
xladykittyx
2008-01-22 . chapter 8
amazing story
princetongirl
2007-08-26 . chapter 8
loved it update soon
druccillamalfoyrox
2007-08-02 . chapter 8
awe..omg
i love this story
it's just so cute
and i also love this song!!
good job!!
Anonymous
2007-07-31 . chapter 8
I loved that story! Please make a sequel!
SquireChriss
2007-07-29 . chapter 8
As usual, you've made the characters yours; made them come to life. I understood both Derek's and Casey's thoughts as well as their emotions. Wonderful story! Keep up the awesome writing! :D:D:D:D:D
-Chriss
Shay Bo Bay
2007-05-30 . chapter 8
that was so cute
i really enjoy reading your stories!
DASEYS.lilies
2007-04-13 . chapter 8
that was just beautiful! oh my...wow..that is so in my top 5 favorite stories now...i really think you did a wonderful job...i mean how everything king of circled back...


nice job!
In Love With Narcolepsy Boy
2007-01-02 . chapter 8
aw. this story was adorable!
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