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NDebN
2010-01-05 . chapter 3
So much cuteness in this story I love it, although I think it's sad that it doesn't go any further then this ^_^
Kitten Kisses
2009-02-03 . chapter 3
I meant to review this before I left for work, but I ran out of time, so...sorry about that. Anyway, the ending was cute. But why did Haruhi leave Tamaki's graduation in a huff? =O

Cheers,
-Manna
Kitten Kisses
2009-02-03 . chapter 2
Ahahaha, the ending to this chapter was perfect. Nice try on the romantic comedy effect, but I love that it failed. It is always more interesting that way. =D

Cheers,
-Manna
Kitten Kisses
2009-02-03 . chapter 1
This was really cute. I think Mori was definitely in character here. I'd say so much more, but I leave for work soon, so I'm trying to read this before I have to leave, hehe. I know, I'm bad.

Cheers,
-Manna
Laughing Cat
2009-01-14 . chapter 3
This was a very cute story. ^_^ My favorite part was how Takashi kept getting cut off whenever he tried to ask Haruhi to call him by his first name.
burnedcoldfeet
2008-12-21 . chapter 3
This story is not completed, right?? Please tell me I'm wrong!

Anyway, it's really cute and everything but it lacks the feeling of end...
burnedcoldfeet
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
Oh, wow... I liked it, how you portrayed Mori's feelings like that... And how you described Haruhi, so cute!!
evilcookiewilleatyou
2008-12-11 . chapter 3
squee! finish it!
ireadtoomanybooks
2008-12-11 . chapter 3
I love it! Please write more :D
KitsuchiTenu
2008-08-03 . chapter 3
a-dor-able
KitsuchiTenu
2008-08-03 . chapter 2
O-MY-GOSH!
Robe a la Anglaise
2008-07-07 . chapter 3
this is by far one of the cutest, most well written MorixHaruhi fics that I've read. I love the idea of them randomly running into each other years later, and the flow and pace of the romance is really well done. Love that shy/awkward/tentative romantic development. I also loved Hunny and Shuna, I thought Hunny was very believable for being several years older but still himself. Makes me want more - a continuation or from Haruhi's pov, etc.
Morgaine Avenel
2008-07-04 . chapter 3
So you are possibly one of the best writers I've stumbled across in this place, and know that I will attempt to read all of your stories to supply you with well-deserved reviews.

I promise I won't throw a brick at you on slow days.

-Luca
LovelyLynn
2008-05-08 . chapter 3
Aww I want to know what happens next! How Mori finally gets up his courage and all that! Or if instead it's Haruhi who gets up her courage! ^ ^ Thanks for writing this!!
Cows are my friends
2008-04-04 . chapter 3
Good story so far.
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