This story is pretty good. Update soon.

Great Story!!

pretty good so far. only one problem degoba, not spelled right, it's dagobah...

Good.

brill so far but i need some han and leia loving lol

GOOD. PLEASE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON.

Well, not too bad an Au. The only major things that I would have to draw complaint with would be watch the spelling errors, and give the main people more to do(ie, make the chapters longer when you can)...I would like to hear more of this back-story that you have for these characters and watch how this story un-folds.

Hmm, so I take it that Mara is somehow Sabe and Obi-wan's daughter...interesting. I gotta see how she plays a part in things from this point forward. Is this going to run the gamut of all three movies, or are things going to get really trippy from this point forward?

O! TWISTIE! You are doign a great job of staying true to the oringinals, but yet altering them in such a slight and perfect way to make the saga take a different past and let Padme fit in.

Good.

A+

Great chapter please continue as soon as you get the chance

Well, not bad so far, even if the chapters are a bit short *g*. I cannot wait to see how things get once they get ot Yavin and the battle for the first Death Star begins. Hmm, gotta love the hints you are putting in about Mara's possible parentage. I have to wonder if vader or Padme know about that, or what their feelings on that regard are..or if old been was aware of the situation either.

Well, can't complain too much about the story so far, but i do have a question, in this timeline, is Tarkin only a General or does he hold the same rankt hat he did in the traditional movies of grand Moff?

Yey update! Great chapter!

UPDATE SOON!
Emma

Well, I like the chapters that you are writing so far, and I enjoy all of the foreshadowing that you have incorporated into the story, but I do have to wonder, when is everything actually going to start being revealed? Also, what exactly is Maras's connection with Obi-Wan? Why do I get the feeling that Sabe may have something to do with it, and if that be the case, then how in the world did Mara come to be Vader's apprentice of all things, instead of the Emporer's Hand? Also, why did Palpatine never remove Padme from Vader's side?

Oh please more.