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| kimchii 2008-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love your one shots! So amazing. Domyouji + Makino Keep writing =) |
| Yurippe 2008-02-16 ch 1,  | abuse“You are trying to be a Maitre’d.” Tsukasa said abruptly, interrupting her in mid sentence. Lol, Tsukasa, you baka! xD Isn't he cute? I began to like him on ep 3 of the dorama. ^^ Although I still like Rui, too... Argh! xD Great one, really! I never read the manga, only watched the beginning of the dorama up to now, but I really like this oneshot. ^^ |
| lovelymit 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseYes yes~! I enjoyed this story so much! OMG~! I love how you included the direct quotes from the manga~! I love how you edited Tama's dialogues~! "And hope had finally shown through" makes a great ending for HYD~!! Even though the way way Tsukushi confessed in the manga is still brilliant too~! |
| elenniel 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseLove this rewrite of the scene! Kinda makes me wish it *had* ended like that. :P (And thankfully, this is mostly error-free in terms of grammar and all...) Good work! |
| Belle 2007-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice, I like how you captured the setting that the scene took place in. I especially liked how you captured Tsukasa's character w/ his mispronounciations =) Very Tsukasa-esque |
| amwong88 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abusethis is even better than the fic i just reviewed!! Really beautiful and touching - the image of Doumiyoji whimpering her name into the crook of her neck while crying is just too painful. |
| MythNLynx 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseOh yes, please make me cry again... I've always wondered why she can stand up for everyone else, but not for herself and him. (I hate how everyone else is always all, "Oh, Tsukushi! Save us! Save us!") Thank you. BTW, the "Joan of Arc" reference is from Vol. 14. Twice Oribe Junpei, Oribe Shingo's younger half-brother, calls Makino Eitoku's Joan of Arc. |
| Kagami Yuki 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abusei really liked how you made the ending this way. of course, i'm still looking foward to the real ending of hana yori dango since i'm still reading, but this is nice. go tama-san! ^-^ |
| Yvette (Mistress of the Pen... 2007-07-18 ch 1, anon. | abuse*Crawls forward like a puppy, eyes huge, tail wagging* THAT WAS SO COOL! I was pressed for time so I didn't log in ^-^; anyways Too awesome, IN UR FACE TSUKISHI! J/K but it's true about what you made Tsukasa say. Lol it was kewl |
| alyssewonders 2006-10-12 ch 1, | abuseOh, the previous Joan of Arc reference was...lemme see, its what that model-guy who was younger than Tsukushi by a year, who it turned out was using her to get revenge against Doumyouji who had sent his older brother to the hospital with one kick, what was his name again...? Meh. Yeah, he called Tsukushi the "Joan of Arc" of Eitoku or something like that, back when they first met on the stairs after an encounter with the Bitch3. Is this what you were talking about? I'm sorry I can't remember specific info like his name and the volume it happened in, I'm just responding off the top of my head. Anyway, good luck with future stories, and may you continue to be inspired to write TxT HYD fiction. Ja ne! |
| Xyjah 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseThis was very good. I am always pained each time I read this scene in the manga. I cried the first time cause it was so sad and filled with emotion. Tsukushi never really thought about how she was hurting the man she loved. I could really feel the emotion in his reasoning with her in this. Very very good one-shot |
| Kari-demon 2006-06-25 ch 1, | abuse*kissu kissu kissu* that was goodly. it gave me the warm and fuzzies. |
| xinusess 2006-06-25 ch 1, | abuseI love it when men cry it makes them seem so sweet ;) aww.. -xinusess xD |
| sis 2006-06-20 ch 1, anon. | abusethank you |
| astures99 2006-06-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW! I love the way you write... kkep on doing more T&T stories, please!! ~_^ |