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| Authorized 2008-08-03 ch 2,  | abuse"You know…I just thought of something…no one is really out of character and this is an attempt at a comedy. That's hard to do, and it's still funny! That ain't bad…" Try and be a little more humble than that, huh? Maybe your views on this chapter have changed since whenever this particular chapter was published, but still...wow. Also, didn't really have a problem with this chapter, other than the fact that Tails just seems like a regular nine year old kid. He's smarter than that, he has to have some kind of knowledge of this kind of innuendo, especially since Sonic has somehow corrupted his mind. One last thing. The word "vociferated" is highly uncommon and it just comes off as superfluous. Reading on... |
| Authorized 2008-08-03 ch 1, | abuseMan, the double-meaning jokes are really starting to wear on me. Yeah, they can be funny, if they don't feel like they were tacked on every gosh dang step of the way. It's like the annoying friend who repeats to you what gross gag just happened in a Judd Apatow film. "Haha she just meant...get it?" Going to read chapter 2 now... |
| Dementa 2008-06-23 ch 8, | abuseOkay, I just read this from beginning to end and I have to say that I really like this. I cracked up so hard! I feel bad for Knuckles... I really do. ^_^ Rogue and Shadow... man, those two need to have at each other already. |
| Mason999 2008-06-13 ch 8, | abuseYou definitely have to update soon cuz this is a story worth finishing. Also tails is one of the most funniest characters here! |
| sky4eva 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abusethis story is really REALLY good. i wish you would write more chapters and maybe even finish this! |
| MarsMonster 2008-02-03 ch 8, | abuselol...that was funny! when r u gonna update the babysitter affair? |
| DragonOTDarkFlame 2008-01-30 ch 8, | abuse(no answer...dead from laughter) |
| tehcatlikepie 2008-01-27 ch 8, | abuseYay! An update! I was wondering what had happened to you, it's like you up and vanished! I really do like your stories and I hope that you'll be updating more often now :) |
| Shadrougeluver 2008-01-27 ch 8, | abuselol that was just funny and VERY cute ^^ i loved it mel ^^ |
| Mystery001 2008-01-27 ch 8, | abuseCool, love the deleted scenes. The part about Sonic was especially funny, with Amy getting into his head and all. Great chapter Mel, hope you update this again soon! -Myz |
| X-treme SR 2007-10-23 ch 7, | abuseYo Tru Mel Meiko Mei Ling. I R-E-A-L-L-Y would enjoy it if you would hurry up with the damn good story! I beg of you. Your making me suffer with the wait! I know you may seem to lost intrest in the Sonic World, but this story would just be too much of an author's talent to waste! You must continue! Don't give up the sonic universe, just read the comics or watch the anime or play the vidion games or read other fanfics, it always gets me back in the mood for shadouge! This is a tip from me, you are an exellent writer! Don't waste your precious gift from God! |
| frostbyte64 2007-09-03 ch 7, | abusec'mon! I want more! Don't give up! |
| frostbyte64 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abuseugh... cream.. |
| bakasurvivor42 2007-07-31 ch 7, | abuseYou really need to finish this...it's great. I love it when Knuckles says way back in an early chapter: "Umm, not sex" |
| The Nightstress 2007-06-22 ch 7, | abuseOh my. THis story certainly is surprising. XD |