Great fanfiction! Intresting to see a younger Kim & Ron, but opposite way around!

Home sweet home! Now Kim and Ron can finally kick back and relax for a few minutes until the next super-villain starts stirring up trouble again.

I'm glad alter-reality Ron mellowed out some. Nothin' like a good 'ol punch in the face to sort things out ;)

Your story is awesome! Hey, thanks for reviewing my 'Enter Kingdom Hearts' story. Yeah, I'll be taking this story to a whole new level, but some part in a way will be the same. But other than that, thanks for reviewing on my story! Hope you make other good stories like this one!
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~GB

Okay, I've always hated parallel dimensions where everything is so very much the same and yet very different at the same time. I can never accept that things would be so similar if there were so many underlying differences. That being said, however, I think you are handling it much better than most stories I've seen which use the approach. I like where I think you are going with some of this.

Stylistically I wonder if some of your descriptions aren't a little too full. (cut out three bad attempts to explain what I mean) Perhaps it is because I suffer from the opposite problem, I don't provide enough details in my descriptions, but I sometimes wish some passages could be trimmed for a faster read - let the reader's imagination fill in more of the details.

KiY

Boy the differences between the characters of the two dimensions are very striking. Each is very different from the other for sure.

It's like you took each one's character traits and went in the opposite direction with the alternate reality's younger versions. Kim was never that big of a jerk or over-protective of Ron, while Ron never did consider stepping out of that shadow, but he did when he put himself out there.

Very confusing fic going here, but enjoying it very much. Hope each pair learns something from the other that strengthens them in the end. Oh, and love the confusion going on with Drakken & Shego.

CB73

nice twist

lol what timing, both of our same-named stories updated at the same time. perhaps I should rename mine to save readers the confusion... Anyway, great chapter! the Ron from this other realm sure is a bit bitter. I'm sure he's not going to do anything to help 'Ann's' headache ^_^

Update soon!

lol well, at least this isn't completly like mine although i was going to use the pan-dimensional vortex inducer too ^_^

i really like the story so far, but i'm a little confused... as far as i could tell it seems like not everything is opposite (like kim still defended ron the first day of pre-k and how ron still dislikes josh). i hope that the other drakken and shego are in future chapters. a bufoonish shego and sarcastic drakken sounds hilarious to me, but its all up to u .

i can't wait for an update (and the confusion it will cause if we both update at the same time, having identical titles and all) ^_^

Okay, this one had just hit the brain pain level. Which is a good thing. I am interested in how this plays out.

Great beginning to the story, can't wait to read more. Excellent idea.

Bubba

Interesting premise. Once again, so much for the "Stoppable Fortress of Immunity." If I were you I'd flesh out your descriptive sentences because I found myself having to read over passages multiple times in order to figure out what was happening, since so much was going on in a few sentences. Well, keep it up. What is Drakken's big plot?

OK I'm guessing a parrell Ronless universe, I like it so far