Yeah, it does work. Again, very well done.

*claps* This is really good!

urgh, Edward left her anyway! -cries- but it was really good, don't worry! thank you!

this is one of my favorite song fics ever

omg.

soo good.

this one's for the favorites.

:]

That was so cute! I loved it!

J'adore!

Yay! More Edward loving Bella while she's not noticing!

I've always wondered what Edward would do if he saw the tape, and now you've told me...I absolutely, positively LOVED it!

Aw! Such a good story, so sweet.

I liked it.

write more stories!

Toodles with oodles and noodles

kenzielicious

wow, that was beautiful.

i wanted to write this so bad last night...but then i wanted to read it so ..THANK YOU I LOVE IT! very sensual

Awee

Hey, nice job on this one...i absolutely love this song. When i was reading twilight, this song was playing through my head! I'm thinking of making up a list of a bunch of songs that coinside with twilight or new moon. What do u think?

hey dom

now this one made me cry i am so seriosy i mean boowho i am crying right now i love it so much

That was cool! I loved it! It was very realistic and you captured Edward really well. Keep writing!