That was completely insane! I've never watched the series the entire way through, but this does leave an interesting image in mind. Good job with the prose, but the subject was an interesting choice. Overall, I was entertained.

X...M...F...D...

That was brilliant.

Just finished watching the Evangelion for the first time. this is the first fic I decided to read. I'm glad you decided to expand on that scene.

P.S. You know where I can find that End of Evangelion movie? I'm not having any luck.

fun very fun 2 blessed words escaped Shinji's stupified lips. Catfight

to bad it's so short

simply awesome.

I think Ritsuko was just asking for that to happen when she made that test. O.o

This story was so freakin funny! Maybe you should write a sequel chapter where the "incident" prevents them from getting to the simulation Evas before the angel attack, and they get stuck in the cleanroom during lockdown! Whatever happens, Shinji is already garunteed to come out of this chemically imbalanced. :D

Funny as HELL! One of the funniest things I've read in a while. Good job.

This story... *thumbs up* IS A ** A!

I like it... the collar idea, i swear, i can actually visualize it in my head... Good shot!

That was brilliant! I laughed so hard that I almost choked on my sandwich. If you get anymore ideas like that for a fan fiction, write 'em!! I'm gonna be laughing all day now...True genius.

Wow, that was... different. Hahaha, but I loved it anyway. But man, I had no idea Shinji was sick enough to do that right in front of people and with a whole room of people watching him. Haha, keep it up.

man that was soo funy, and more the part of rei as a secreat pervert, but what kills me is the part of the collars, and that the hole creew of th bridge were washing them man is funny you have to write a other one

...wow! Wonderful, just brilliant. I doubt many could pull off a plot like that...man, could you provide me with a few ideas?!

You're very talented, keep up the great work!

funny... good...

OH, that was just too funny, I loved it.
Watch the series again and come up with some other stuff.
I can think of visiting Rei's and Shinji & Asuka's kiss but I'm sure theres others.