 Granky Strundmendel 2007-12-02 . chapter 14 Just finish it eventually okay. Don't leave this unfinished forever. |
 Desdemona Kakalose 2007-03-04 . chapter 14i'm fine with waiting :) i'll keep it in favorites for a while |
 Dancing Feather 2007-02-26 . chapter 14Thank you so much for the lack of lemon! There is already plenty of that on the internet! XD |
 Dancing Feather 2007-02-26 . chapter 13Don't feel bad for not updating as soon as you wanted, I know the feeling. ^_^
I love the part were Zim second guesses his second guesses with blowing himself up or going out the window, it made me laugh. |
 Shoki-Chan 2007-02-22 . chapter 13You know, I just now realized how... politically efficient this story is. None of this angry mob business would of happened if people could just learn to understand. I know that's not an important factor in the story, but I thought I'd just point it out.
Nice job by the way. Keep up the good work. |
 Truffles B.Cordial Xcocolatl 2007-02-20 . chapter 14 WHY!
i was really into dis story! boo-hoo... u big meanie!
srry. but seriously, if u are such a nice writer, why will you put this story on hiatus? if you PLEASE don't, and maybe update a little faster, i promise (pinkie-style) to force all of my friends to R&R!
you oughtta do dis wonderful wurld a big favor and continue dis awesome story! |
 Invader Kate11 2007-02-19 . chapter 13whos SkoF? and howd he\she get in the house? did gaz help him/her?
anyway, i loved this story.
GREAT job! ^_^ |
 Fushica 2007-02-19 . chapter 14yay! no lemons! ^_^ |
 Ikumak 2007-02-18 . chapter 14That's alright, everyone gets writer's block.
No slash? Keh, that's alright too. This has been good enough without it and not every Invader Zim fiction centered around these two NEEDS slash. I'll be waiting patiendly for the next chapter! I hope things get better soon. |
 Aseret Kitsune 2007-02-15 . chapter 13It's getting very dramatic and exciting. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
 vampireXyaoi 2007-02-04 . chapter 13when is the lemon?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! very good story |
 tincan 2007-02-04 . chapter 13at first i wasn't going to read this, but Im glad i did
Im loving this story, cant wait till you update it ^-^ |
 Fushica 2007-02-03 . chapter 13awesome, can't wait to read more |
 Reincarnated Rat 2007-02-03 . chapter 13It was pretty good. Though I think it would have been better had Zim chased after Dib and followed him into the boiler room. I thought it would be Zim first, or Gaz, and Zim would be demanding answers - 'What is this kiss you speak of?'
I hope Dib kicks his stalker out of his house and never thinks of her again.
The story itself was written pretty well. It couldn't stop reading once I started. You did a good job writing it. I look forward to the next chapter. |
 Desdemona Kakalose 2007-02-03 . chapter 13so its over? well if it is, i like it! i don't know skof though. did you make her up or did i just forget? |