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| myshadowspirit 2008-02-18 ch 1,  | abuseSo sweet! |
| Choices of Life 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abusethis was so captivating i need to read more of your fanfiction XP |
| The Girly Man 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant. I've read three of your stories today and this is my favorite. Probably because I adore Haru and his adorable-ness. Anyway, please keep writing! You're terribly good at it. =] ~Brenna* |
| Saja Natalia 2006-08-21 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I adore this piece of work. The last two really got to me. You're really good at this! Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of work with us all. Saja_Natalia |
| Red Skye 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseThe emotion in this story is unbelievable. In every sentence I could feel Haru's pain as if I was the one who's letters weren't being answered. Beautiful job. I could feel the anxiety in every word. Very powerful story, finished with a powerful ending. -Red Skye |
| xxmanga-ka 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuse*sobs* that was so good! you really got haru's personality down...good job! |
| kashii marii 2006-06-27 ch 1, | abuseI very much like the writting! I found no errors whatsoever! Great letters by the way ;D. Very much sounds like something Haru would write. |
| WandererWolf 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseHeartbreaking. |
| Jay Bird12 2006-06-21 ch 1, | abuseoh .. poor, poor Haru T_T |
| iluvkandygrl 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE this! It, shows how Haru really loves her and , it's wonderful |
| The Cucumber Lady 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseOh my God. That was beautiful. You've got Hatsuharu's character down perfectly... so... freaking... in... character...! The last few of them are so sad... and the whole time I was reading it, I almost forgot that it's just a fanfiction. Seriously, it's so in-character and so wonderfully written, it was... I don't know. Please write more Furuba stuff! -_=TCL=_- |
| Sarete 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseWow! *claps in excitement* This cannot be your first fic! It's so advanced! Stuff I liked: Your attention to detail- you really got in Haru's head, I like that. You know how to keep from going OOC-crazy, which is awesome. Keep it up in your future fics! The only response from Rin- very definite insight into her character- and Haru's second to last letter... *sobs and hugs Haru to make him feel better* Good job! Nice additions of the unsent letters- it gave more insight into Haru's mindset. Overall, GOOD JOB! *applauds for amazing author* Keep it up! Please write more Furuba! I'll be lookin' for more stuff from you, chickadee... *glares in Kagura-ish fashion* Ha ha, nice job! |