Beautiful and touching story. Very well-written. It is sad, and yet...

Good characterization of Hatori, Akito, and Shigure.

that was so sad and beautiful! *cries* have a cookie

dear hulahula,
i don`t know ow many times i read your fiction, but everytime i cry!Your story is so heartbreaking.
what i mean is i love and hate your story:love because, yes because the story is just beautiful, hate because is so sad ( no i like it !) and because Akito died.
thank you
loritakitochan

omg i'm still crying. that was a really good fanfiction

Well, this one knows that this is a late review, but everyone likes a late review, right? So without further ado--EEK! So good! And they both stayed in character, too. It was wonderful, this one only wishes that she'd have discovered it earlier to read it as you updated. Thanks for sharing your story with her!

The Siacatmesecat

This is absolutely beautiful. I can give absolutely no criticism, like I usually try to give. This is just gorgeous, and I was almost moved to tears.

Lovely, lovely, lovely.

Liked it? More like LOVED it. It's a beautiful story, and it was like Akito's rebirth, or something like that, with what happened with Kagura. I'm wondering who the father is, but it must be a person who shouldn't be named.

Very, very beautiful. It touches the heart, yes, it does.

i figured it was complete cause akito died but then you threw in the "kagura's pregnant" curve so i thought there would be more. but i get it now...

i guess i'm just really slow- kagura's pregnant with the next kami-sama! that really works out. thanks.

you finally updated! this chapter was wonderful- very heart touching and tender. i liked your recreation of akito's first kiss with shigure. i hope you keep on writing and update soon!

The beginning and the center part of your story did emit emotions from me, but by the end of your last chapter I lost touch with it. However, you did a good job in writing this...the last scene between Akito and Shigure was just as I've hoped. Will be glad to read your future works ;)

aww nice ending! I always thought that hatori and shigure had a good realationship with each other. too bad it is over write more storioes please!

my god, thats loveless...

poor Akito, but at least she finally have peace, poor Shigure, but its ok, i like it, please, writte another Aki-gure *-*

I loved it!

finally@! u update! took a while, heheh. kagura's pregnant? whose ba-b? tell us

GodsdamnititalltohellIhateyou.

And also love you.

And she's... nonono, not even gonna say it, not my Akito.

But this was magnificent. It makes me think of music for some reason... But anyway, the entire... with the hands, and the kiss, and then... Plus, the ending, the regenerative note, was very interesting. I never would have thought of that.

[You used emanate instead of imminent once...]

I have t get off right now 'cause mom needs the computer but I loved thi and will be depresed for weeks n worship you I hope you're satisfied you evil person.