hm actually I really kind of like this. Will there be more? Please? I would love to see it continued. This is the first one I have read with Sephiroth's POV. Very well done. I really like the first chapter in how you described him and his need and how those around him treated him.


I hope you update soon!

Sweet. And charming. Update soon.

O_O

please write more? ^_^ thanks!

good story ive read both chaps and i like it please update this A.S.A.P. and i can image this as it happens in fact i can imagine Cloud a little boyish lol

Update,Update,Update!Yay!

aw soo cute! more please

this isn't so bad..it's actually getting better and better...u just keep writing. PLEASE!

Awsome continue please

hmm. I don't usually read m/m pairings. But I like your writing. I'll give it a shot :)