amazing one shot!!

*gapes*

Dear god, I love you! YOU OWN MY SOUL FOR THIS FIC! GAAH! Brilliant.

stares...starees *melts* y-you and the fluff and the hotness and usopp getting zoro pregnant and- and Luffy just coming out of nowhere. this is so unbelievably mind-blowing. I actually think i love you.

I kept repeating "Oh my gosh!" and squeeing like crazy and laughing my head off and...

ah, I can't believe I haven't come across this beautiful, fluffy, hilarious gem of a fic before but I'm really glad that I've finally done so! Gawd, and Luffy, popping outta nowhere and his so-sure "I knew that" made me love this and Luffy and Merryshipping more than I already do. That was perfect. :D

I love how you split it up into parts adding them in and then finishing with that that really really sweet conclusion. You've captured everyone's voices perfectly (if they suddenly found themselves in this kind of situation...) and I especially liked Usopp's ridiculous boasts and Nami's analysis of it [I liked it very much]. And, wah, it was just great. Many thanks for writing this!

OMG, im kind of a newbie with this "Merryshipping" topic. But I totally loved it! It was comical and cute and sexy... Excellent fic.

My fav part was from Usopp:

"What! If you'll excuse me, nobody raped me - in fact, I raped Nami. And Zoro. Numerous times. I raped them ten times each and now Zoro is pregnant - "

I laughed so hard with that part... Awesome!
Thanks for sharing

You should consider doing a second chapter...

What a horrible, terrible mess of love, limbs, punches, bites and fantastic! I hope you write a sequel or ... or something similar soon!

I missed this the first time around so: I love you. I love your Merryship. I love Nami orchestrating a group deflowering and that Usopp is her original partner is sexy crime. This fic gives the early colorspreads a whole new meaning.

-Hsiu

... this is. perfect. just perfect. So funny and tender and -- aww. They just fit so well and I love how IC you kept everyone, with that side of cracktastic that's so normal for them. The closet episode made me squee from beginning to end with its hotness, Usopp's "I raped Zoro and now he's pregnant" thing had me laughing so loud I scared my cat, and I just about died when Luffy was just suddenly there. It was pure awesome from start to finish. XD thank you for writing that. n.n

hahaha
This... is on crack. I love it.
But not enough Luffy. ;_; I do like it that nobody realized he was there though.
good job!

I feel obligated to let you know that this was one of the most disturbing, brain-melting things I have ever read in my life, and I loved it to bits. It was hilarious and sweet and your writing style is beautiful. That is all.

This is supposed to be all wrong in all sorts of ways, but it isn't, it is still wonderfully wonderful and how on earth did you manage to make Ussop sexy (even mentioning his nose! how?!)? Unbelievable. ;_; Brilliant as always, nice use of all their quirks, and the last line was perfect.

"What! If you'll excuse me, nobody raped me - in fact, I raped Nami. And Zoro. Numerous times."

So funny. I was laughing from start to finish. And now that you've planted the idea in my head, I can't see them any other way. Too bad this is the only OT5 I've EVER seen.

Bless you for writing them so well. Blast you for writing them so well that I will forever see mental images of this when I read One Piece. Sasuga.

(Also, every one of Usopp's lies WINS. Indefatigably.

Oh man. I really, really, really, really enjoyed this.

I always said I wasn't gonna read One Piece porn. None at all. Which would keep it happy and sacred, unlike... uh, Gundam Wing, Ranma 1/2, Yu-gi-oh... pretty much every series I ever got into. But, as fate would have it... this ended up being my first foray into porny!One Piece. And lo, it was good.

(moar plz)

1.) This is so going on my favorites.

2.) I think I could possibly love you.

3.) This makes me want to get a job in the publishing industry, just so I can hire you and pay your ass money for your genius. Heh, maybe I am going overboard here.
...
But hot damn, this made me laugh so hard I almost gave myself a hernia. Actually, I think I did. (Better avoid the doctor though, he'll likely institutionalize me...:P)

4.)I have to ask. Will there be anything else along these lines? I don't mean to be pressure-y or anything I just wanted to know if I should keep an eye out that's all.

5.)Usopp claiming to rape Nami and Zoro is only topped by Luffy popping out of –erm- nowhere. I bow to you. *head scrapes floor*

6.)*hearts* * hearts** hearts*