 Athena's Darknight 2009-08-14 . chapter 2awesome!! why ddi you stop updateing?!
Man now I'm going to go crazy..please update soon! It's so good!! |
 traddy 2008-10-15 . chapter 2don't leave me like that! please update soon it is interesting |
 Shadow Quil 2008-07-13 . chapter 2Hey! Cool story :D Update soon, kay? |
 jicalazuxil 2007-12-10 . chapter 2such an... enticing... cliffhanger. |
 Piisa 2007-10-08 . chapter 2argh! whats going to happen now?you can't leave us like this in this crucial point!please...can you continue this story?I really like it... |
 Tenshi_Psyche 2007-09-11 . chapter 2 Well I must say, this is a very interesting story and it will be such a waste if you did not continue with it. When you feel a little discouraged then just think of your fanfics as artworks, only its in a written form, when you stop doing your work, doesn't it irritate you seeing that it is incomplete or doesn't it feel right not letting your work be completed? It will both make you happy and us,the readers, happy. But if you really want to stop, its your decision. Anyway, your story is great and you did a good job with it. |
 nightfight 2007-07-15 . chapter 2I love your storie!
it was great! |
 Night_Angel 2007-07-14 . chapter 2 Whoa...cool! umm im a bit confused. maybe you can clarify. Love the story. Great Details! who is gonna end up with who? Rae and aqualad or what? And why is the Queen throwing a spear at raven? I MUST KNOW! ...please... |
 Nikki-4 2007-06-20 . chapter 2its really good and creative, You've made me so coures as to why she is there. well i hope you post more soon. =) |
 katyyyyyyy 2007-06-08 . chapter 2 hey great story i love it keep going |
 roar! 2007-06-07 . chapter 2 hi!
i simply love this fic! please keep going, but if you choose not to, please tell me what happens! i'm dying to know!
you rock! keep going! |
 Kyomona 2007-06-04 . chapter 2gah!
dont stop now!
XD |
 APurpleAvacado 2007-05-28 . chapter 2Aww! that's a shame. I really hope yo do start writing again. I like this story and I'm really curious about what exactly is going to happen next!
I mean! why would Aqualads mother throw a spear at Raven!? seriously! pls I wish to know what Aqualad hasn't told Raven! why don't they last long?! was is Mai and Prodigis relationship so odd?
You can't stop writing now! It's just wrong! please start again!
but I have one tiny suggestion, please, whatever you do, don't make your chapters entire conversations, please put some descriptions in there! It would make the chapter SO much better! adding to the Bestness of it already! |
 paprika90 2007-04-18 . chapter 2i was so glad that you have finally updated this story only to be disapointed that you have decided to stop writing fanfiction for a while and possibly forever... it was a great chapter filled with the suspence of what exactly was raven brought to atlantis (or the underwater palace were aqualad resides) as well as the hint of a crush/love triangle between the trio...ah well. things happen though. i enjoyed the chapter after the long wait. good luck with your art and writing and hopefully i can read another chapter soon. ^_^ |
 Elladora 2007-04-07 . chapter 2 Please update! don't tell me you have forgotten of your wonderful story. i have to say aqualad and raven is something new, but it is great and exicting. And i frankly want to know what happening with all the queen attacking raven. i hope that when you update you have like at least 3 chapters cause i am that desperate. |