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| Black Raven 13 2008-01-29 ch 2, | abuseHahaha! Star screams so much, which is funny, can't wait for more!! |
| Azariel 2007-10-04 ch 2, anon. | abuse"i'll give you a kiss!" "still no." well played, well played. poor rae, so unloved. so angry... scratch that, poor star for inciting said rage. and go bb for getting her to put the claws away. saved star's life, he did. mabey rae's not so unloved after all... my vote? frog prince, with all the bb jokes and fluff that goes with it. we already have a raven undercurrent, so why not a beastboy sideline? "cy: frog prince huh? rob: too bad b's more of a toad! bb's entire demeanor screamed downcast rae: don't worry about them. you'll always be my knight. beast: i've always wondered how a demon can sire my angel. an angel of darkness to be sure, but an angel none the less. star: rob never uses such words of sweet kindness to me. i do not know if i shall be happy for friend beastboy, or feel the jelousy for the relation he shares with friend raven. she decides for the happiness as her two friends enjoy a chaste kiss, knowing their words will be rewarded later... sorry. overactive imagination. |
| Azariel 2007-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abuse... still ... can't ... stop ... laughing! one thing though: rob hitting on rae? you fixed it though, with bb throwing his arm over her after rae's death-glare. i almost expected beast to growl at rob. quietly. wonder what's next? |
| Ravyn13 2007-06-13 ch 2, | abuseVery cool. I love the reactions. I can;t stop laughing! Are you still really doing more chappys? I hope so. Thanks again for a great story! :) ~Rae |
| Ravyn13 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseLOL! I could so see Beast Boy doing that! (I thought it was funny too. I laughed out loud, gaining very odd looks from those around me.) Great story. :) ~Rae |
| Latias 24 2007-06-07 ch 2, | abuseNice, pls update oh and this is from my godbrother :i think ur story was interesting not bad i like it |
| schemily200 2007-05-12 ch 2, | abusecool. i love it! it's so random and sweet and... and... and... *Hyperventilates and faints* how did you come up with this? it is so random!! toodles, schemily200 |
| titangirl797 2007-01-14 ch 2, | abuselol very funny story update soon it rocks! |
| fan 2006-12-12 ch 2, anon. | abuseHanzel and Geretal |
| ChristianKid95 2006-12-06 ch 2, | abuseLOL! Great job! I vote for Cinderella next, then Snow White. :D |
| ChristianKid95 2006-12-06 ch 1, | abuseLOL! That's funny! great job! |
| kiitycule 2006-08-31 ch 2, | abuselol, tis all good. |
| Kirstyann 2006-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abusevery good, i really enjoyed this one. I vote Hansel and Gretel to be next! lol. Poor Raven, I dunno how she dealt with all the interuptions without losing her temper! |
| goddess-lil-angel 2006-07-26 ch 2, | abuseThis is a super cute idea! Raven reading Grimm tales, haha. Well, just a comment about the review by EtherealAssassin07...were we supposed to know that Raven was only 1/4 demon? I hadn't heard that before, so that is the new fact of the day! Okay, I vote for sleeping beauty or Rapunzel, (if we can only vote for one then I would like sleeping beauty please!) Can't wait for the cinderella chapter! Peace out, Hope |
| HeadGoddessofCynicism 2006-07-23 ch 2, | abuseI vote for Snow White! The original version would have Starfire screaming her head off, something that I would find extremely funny. |