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Reviews for: Sibling Rivalry
Akai.Akumu
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
Well this is the sad moment I've been dreading. I've now offically run out of Scarred Sword Heart RuroKen fics... This was my last one. Hopefully in the near future I'll see more posted but for now let me be alone with my sadness.

More on topic: I loved these two fics about the children's relationship with eachother. very sweet and heart warming. You made Murasaki up all on your own? Also about the Thunderstorm... The whole side story Kenji told to Mura Mura .. Did you make that up? I'm very curious... Talk to you later!
SamuraiShadow13
2007-11-26 . chapter 1
HHAhah i fell of the chair when they had the sushi fight @_@X
Ruto Kuntai
2007-07-30 . chapter 1
The one thing I really enjoy about your work Scarred Sword Heart, is that you are 100% passionate about your stories, that is what makes you such a excellent writer. However, your attention to detail, top notch writing skills and excellent spelling accompany that as well. I really enjoy your work, its truly a marvel of what fanfiction should be. Enjoyable, entertaining, passionate about the story etc.

Thank you for all the great stories, chapters, and hard work, I greatly appreciate it.

Ruto Kuntai
Mura-chan?
2006-09-25 . chapter 1
That was somewhat cute but who in their right mind would want to name their child "Mura" meaning "village" or "inconsistancy"?
charmed-sword
2006-07-03 . chapter 1
What a cute little story!
I just love Mura-Mura, she is so adorable. Kenshin and Kaoru did a great job of dealing with the situation. Sibling rivalry can often be messy, and the inkwell incident was written so well! You write children so well. I love how Kenshin explained to Kenji how when he was small he was just like Mura, and then how he was using his ki lessons to find her. And my favourite part was when Kenji stepped in and helped his sister, and then gave her the rooster. Aw!
Hidari
2006-06-30 . chapter 1
Like I said, cute cute cute! I love the way you've fleshed out Kenji and Mura-chan. I particularly like how, after all the squabbling, they exchange hidden smiled at the end. I'm sure Kenshin notcies a lot of things he doesn't comment on.
skenshingumi
2006-06-24 . chapter 1
I liked the realistic way the kids got in trouble in the first place by annoying each other. I particularly liked the way you showed Kenshin's gentle way to remind his son of his own bids for attention at the age his sister is now. That was a nice touch to the story.
NovembersAsh
2006-06-22 . chapter 1
THats such a cute fic-lit! I love it!! *hugs Kenji and Mura tight* "You two are just too cute!"

Great story!!
ruruken15
2006-06-22 . chapter 1
Ah! Kaiwaii story! Kenji and Mura are both just the epitome of sibling rivaly and makeups! loved it!
TrisakAminawn
2006-06-21 . chapter 1
Not telling Kenshin about the fight, mm? XD I'd expect Himura-san to notice they were hiding something. Eh, maybe he did. XD The rooster's name is Sano? ^^ That's cute.
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