Reviews for Undercover
xkawaiix 6/23/06 . chapter 2
AH! OMG! Wonderful story. And I like how you ended it! Twas perfect. -
obsessedwithstabler 6/23/06 . chapter 2
Aw... very cute! And thanks for taking my reviews seriously! No one I know does... Anyways, my story is coming along quickly. Liv and EL were messing around before he was kidnapped, and the crew finds out. And Munch is complaining abouut coffee and throwing paper airplanes at his partner. Oh, and could you please tell me how to get my story posted. I still can't figure it out (scratches head). i'm so confused (sniffle). Thanks for mentioning me! I feel all warm and fuzzy...
TV Angel 711 6/22/06 . chapter 1
please keep going! I like it so far!

E&O forever!

SVU forever!
Who-will-change-the-world 6/22/06 . chapter 1
that was CRUEL! lmfao..i figured something like that would happen, but good writtingL:D
ficfan 6/22/06 . chapter 1
yah i agree with these other guys that you should probably write a little more to this story...

you asked for suggestions... no one's done a post ep or any stories related to influence (season finale). there might be some story there worth telling with Casey and that dude.
WuHaoNi 6/22/06 . chapter 1
Amazing one-shot. The bantering between the guys was excellent; it seems like something that would happen on the actual show. I'm intrigued by the way you've taken a rather ambiguous plot line/episode and turned it into an excellent story.
Styxion 6/22/06 . chapter 1
Interesting. Like the idea, and it's all very in-character.

I look forward to seeing where it goes.
Kelly of the midnight dawn 6/22/06 . chapter 1
What I'd like to see? Well first thing I want is... SAVE HER! SAVE HER DAMN IT! You are so unbelievably evil! SAVE HER!

I've always wanted to see a different version of "Starved" and you are writing it so well. There are a bunch of other episodes that probably deserve alternate plotline stories and maybe that can be my suggestion to you.

And yes I remember you, you are awesome but incredibly evil right now so maybe I'll give you more ideas of things I'd like to see as well as more high praze when you SAVE HER!

Elliot and Olivia for eternity (SAVE HER!)

Merry Shipper Christmas

Proud EO shipper

-Kelly

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idinakristinfan 6/22/06 . chapter 1
Great!
AdventureGirl6 6/22/06 . chapter 1
Oh wow! This is going into my favorites list! Please continue! I can't believe they were arguing while that jerk was getting into the apartment! Did the others like NOT notice? El should have been stating at the screen! (Well all three guys!) Please update SOON! This seems like a kinda 'Romance' genre too.
AntisocialButterfly13 6/22/06 . chapter 1
I like this story, update soon!

As for stpry ideas, I've always thought that that old song by Bonnie Rait, "Let's Give Them Something to Talk About" always fit with Elliot and Olivia. Terrible song though...
N. Halifax 6/22/06 . chapter 1
WOW! good cliffhanger! im glad this isnt EO which made it more fun to read! keep up the good work and update soon! olivia better not get raped!
omegia 6/22/06 . chapter 1
hey great story!Love your writing great talent!keep it up!
Chad'sBrucas 6/22/06 . chapter 1
I LOVED IT. U have to !
Iwannahamberger2 6/22/06 . chapter 1
OMG! THAT WAS SO CRUEL AREYOU TRYING TO GIVE ME A HEART ATTACK WRITE MORE DAMNIT!
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