I really like this idea of how Mrs Zabini started on the whole killing her husbands thing, and the Blaise/Harry part was gorgeous :D

Elena is quite the character, a "famously beautiful", brokenhearted murderess...I like it that she still feels something for her son. Nice.

Je... poor Elena XD
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I really liked the beginning and the middle of this story. However, I think you could have come up with a more developed conclusion. I did not realize that Elena believed that Blaise was hers to control.

Overall, I like your writing style and ideas. It's very refreshing.

interesting sucha shame his mother was so bitter and twisted though

Nice. Short. Sweet. HarryBlaise, not my OTP, but a great pairing nontheless. As is this.

That was cute and a very good protrayl of Balise's mother welldone!