|Reviews for Part man, Part Machine: The Night Hunter Story|
| Wolf55 8/2/07 . chapter 4
good story so far, the only problem was the time framed used, I mean 2 hours for replacing the entire side of a person when it takes like 5 hours when doing open heart surgery, I think it would have been more like days or weeks, with them replacing so much of his body, other than that keep going, you're going good
| The Bud 2/3/07 . chapter 1
It wouldn't make any genetic sense for the males to be the carriers. I know that the incident of having a female mutant is about a fourth of having a male mutant, and the only way that could happen is if the female had two affected x genes, all implications implied, but if the male was the only carrier, women could only be latent mutants, with a few rare exceptions, like true colour blindness. It's possible that the mutation tendancy occured first in a male, thus relatlating every mutant on earth within a few generations. It could be possible that mutations start on the mitocondreal DNA, thus making women the primary carriers, but that would mean that few male mutants would exist, so the probibal senario is that if a woman has an affected X cromasone and a normal one, she will not be a mutant, but if her x cromasones are both affected, she will be a mutant, a male with the affected cromazone would indeed be a mutant with the exception of an XXy male. But that would mean that Jean Grey's father was a mutant. Have fun with that! Yer ol' pal, The Bud.
| mcgurrin 8/12/06 . chapter 2
i like it
| morring star 7/30/06 . chapter 2
more more more this going great but why would kitty marry some one who seems to be so ant mutant? you really seem to have messed with the charter.
| Thomas K.T.K 7/29/06 . chapter 2
Yeah it was good. I'm a bit surprised Kitty is with a mutant hating husband.
| Imortal 7/27/06 . chapter 1
Hey its really good.I liked it. Its more a a parrant conflict that throws jon in the midle of it all. Wich is never fun because when my parrents fought and brought us into the middle of it it was hell.
| mcgurrin 7/26/06 . chapter 1
| Medicated 6/23/06 . chapter 1
The story's okay, but the problem is, if Kitty was his mother and a non-mutant was his father, he would be born human because it's MALES that carry the mutant gene. SOrry to nitpick...