A great story. Very good.

Well...*eyebrow* Wasn't expecting that... sneaky Star...

NO! Rick! *sniff*

Good thing that never happened, eh?

WOW! That was great! and sad, Rick DIED? Wait, no you said he was hung...just because you're hung doesn't mean he nescisarily (sp?) died. I mean he was hung in "The Mummy" but he didn't die..something else could have happened. I would say "do this" or "do that" as I use to, but I realized if I did that, then if you bended to your reviewers wishes, it wouldn't be YOUR fanfic, it'd be ours. So you do what you want, I can only pray you continue!

Oh, woww. Wonderful twist. I love how you portrayed Evie. :) Even if I'm not a big Mummy fan, I thought I'd review. For your sake. :) Since I'm so sweet and all. 'Kay, I'm out. Ciao.

*blink* Wow, nice twist there! Good job!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You murdered Buttflap boy! waaaaaahhhh! You know, I really think you should write a sequel in which it was all a dream... or no, make evie slap that fat bastard and he tells the he was joking, rick's really alive, etc...

But not my buttflap boy!

EEEEEEEKKKKKKKK! Talk about your change of story! That was weird, I'll say that much!

what a not nicce story!*Humph*

Oops.

That's bad.

Not your story, of course, your story is great, but...oops. LOL, glad it didn't happen that way!

wonderful story, i love it. very sad though... :D

wow...WOW... i never thought of it THAT way... that WOULD change everything... good story i liked it

wait... no not fair u can't do that! :( i was gonna marry him

Tragic in the sense that it could almost have been this way. It's an interesting angle on the story, but ultimately a final one. I enjoyed reading even though I could see the tragedy coming. Good work, you should write more.

VERY well writen... but... but... NOT MY RICK!