And within ten years, Sasuke kills Naruto as e's response to not getting e's way is always to react with violence. I'm sure e'll say, 'Shit, Naruto, I'm sorry,' at the funeral.

I personally think you should've given Sasuke a harder time to compensate for all the crying I did!

i just finished the entire story and i have to say that it was very different from anything i have ever read. i liked it a lot you have a lot of talent.

hey do you have a full version of the song that they were singing? cuz that looked like a funny song

this story is awesome! great job! =3

just don't forget...

Sweet! i can't wait to read more!

Sweet! i love it!

i love this story! i also like thay you put SOME in frount of the line about girls becaus ei'm not like that and will never be like that and most storys would have just put ALL girls are like that. XD

Ohh man XD I had completely forgotten how amazing this fanfic were! I was just taking it easy and watching some old pics when I saw those that I have done from this fanfic, and then I just thought "Damn, I just HAVE TO read it again!" so now I will read it once more :D if you want some more pictures done or have any ideas, don't hesitate to write a note, ne? :) if you want, ofc! XD haha

Bloody, bloody, brilliant.

I have no shame in saying that I've just stayed up an entire night reading your story and that it's now 10.37am, because...ooh.

OOH.
OOH OOH OOH.

Hopefully the oohs convey my delight.

You should be proud of this creation, because it was an absolute wonder to read and...it contained so many unspoken truths and morals, it completely reminded me of Masashi Kishimoto's morals hidden in the actual Naruto manga. Which is a stunning achievement.

POUR EXAMPLUH (nifty phonetic french says HELLO), he gives background stories to the antagonists, so you start to realise you have no idea whose side you should be on. Everyone fights for a reason. We'd feel more comfortable if the bad guy was just a bad guy so we could hate them without feeling guilty, but he makes us uncomfortably human by showing us that even the bad guys are doing what they think is right. Can't hate 'em if you understand 'em.

And your story...OOH.

OOH, OOH, OOH.

"It's easier to hit someone when you know nothing about them."
EXACTLY. EXACTLY EXACTLY MY GOAT YOU INCREDIBLE PERSON -
The sad thing is you understand these things because they've happened to you, but at least in doing so you've been able to share some really enlightening stuff with people like me :3

And even the characters you created who I disliked automatically (Ray and Mike!! xD) were homophobic because the religion they believed in preached it to be wrong. Sasuke picked on Naruto so he could feel that power in his fingertips, the power he didn't have in his controlling home. And the saddest part in this entire story (I unashamedly admit - OKAY THERE'S A LITTLE SHAME BUT WE'LL IGNORE THAT - that I actually, actually, sobbed, whimpered, and got proper red-rimmed leaky eyes at this point and cursed the three boys) is when after getting to know Naruto but then reading that book, they doubted him without a second thought. He opened up to them after everything they'd done to him and they doubted him. They didn't have the RIGHT to doubt him. Sasuke's little park-swing-wet-eyes-moment made me forgive them a little.

BUT JUST A LITTLE -

Ho my goat I'm rambling. I think the point of sending you this review is that I wanted to tell you,

1)this is going straight to my favourites with pride, and

2)thank you.

Just thank you. Thank you for sharing. Your words are amazing. You amaze me.

Thank you.

(LONGEST.
REVIEW.
EVER.
XD)

Wonderful. Your story was realistic maybe because you put so much your own experiences/feelings/thoughs on it that i could feel them sometimes pouring from the text.
I really admired that how you talked about your own life, i always did read the author notes. You see i could never talk about my problems like that.
Only thing that bothered me that i didnt cry i think it's because this story hit me from different aspect but well maybe next time. Thanks!

<3

i really loved ur 'sticks and stones' fanfic the first time i read it, but fell even harder for it the second time i read it.
thank you again for writing such an awesome fanfic. this is ultimately one of my top three favorites!

I really enjoyed reading this story.I especially loved the ending.